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Q: well me and my friends want to earn money but nothing seems to work that great (and our moms wont let us baby sit)!!!!!!
we have tried:
-car wash
-doing work around the house
thanx bunches,
need money
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Mow... or do chores around the house-trix
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Q: is this a good poem?
i made it up:
once there was a boy
he lived by the shore
he played with a toy
man, he was a bore!
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lol its short and cute...-trix
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Q: How come I dont have anything in my INBOX????
I give really good advice but i dont get any mail!!
thanx,
*~bre_babbles~*
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Well sometimes people may just skip right over your column try not to take it so personally-trix
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Q: my life is shit
i wanna die
here i go
its a bumpy ride
wondering how and when
it should be done
should i stab my chest
or use a gun
should i poison myself
or maybe drown
will people smile
or will they frown
will they cry
i'll never know
doesnt matter
here i go
should i slit my wrists
or not do it at all
im on a cliff
should i fall
if i die
will you care
or will you pretend
i was never there
why doesnt anyone like me?
why doesnt anyone care?
why doesnt anyone help?
why isnt anyone there?
I try to talk to people
I try to tell them how I feel
damn, i pour my heart to them
because this i can't conceal
I've always been ignored
I've always been scared
I've cried
I've tried
But now I wana die
So now I have made a choice
a choice about death or life
I wipe my tears away
and get out a knife
I stab it into my wrists
cut them real deep
soon I'll be in a better place
the bloods starting to seep
i have no more worries
no more fears
no more pain
dont have cry no more tears
now i am happy
wait, should I be?
I have missed out on my whole life
I am drenched in blood, just look at me
I am sorry mommy
I am sorry dad
I knew you always loved me
sorry to make you sad
but now all i can see is white
i'm getting close to the light
bye to people who ignored me'
bye to the people who hated me
bye to the people who didn't know i even existed bye forever
I am at the light now
I am in a better place
do not follow me
i am never to far away
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Well im just pointing this out on your lines saying you'll be in a better place... a better place then world itself is heaven... but if you are suicidal then... you'd go to hell unless your referring to that in the first place-trix
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Q: Hey adivce culumnists. I have a Question I write poetry and am wondering what you think of this? The last poem an this question is published by eternal portraits. I really don't get support with poetry.
I have three poems I want you to look at and tell me what you think.It would mean alot to me! Thanx!
What A Wonderful Life
As a young girl lays in bed one night.
She thinks of her life happenings.
She thinks of the smiles.
She thinks of the frowns.
She thinks of the tears that have been shed.
She thinks of the feelings of having her heart broken.
She thinks of the feelings of having her heart mended.
She thinks of all the people she knows and smiles.
What a Wonderful Life!
The Song Of Spring
Spring come to me Please don't leave me here alone!
Bring to me the song of Spring
Bring to me the Tulips and Daffodils.
Bring to me the Blue Blue sky and Green Green grass.
Bring to me the chirpping birds and the Buzzz of the Bees.
Please don't leave me here!
I'm tired of the gloom and doom!
No more cold cold days
No more fog to to see!
Leave the rain and wind behind!
Bring to me the song of Spring
Lord I Wonder?
Lord I wonder why I feel alone?
I know thou watchest over me.
I know thou watchest me come closer too thee.
I know thou watchest me go a stray from thee.
I know thou lovest me, then why do I a stray from thee?
I lovest thee, thy Lord then why do I 'cause thee pain?
I thank thee Lord for loving me, I thank thee Lord.
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Try not to repeat things to much... that over does it and makes a collision of lines... i learned that too-trix
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Q: Which do you think is better?
1)
The Moon
The moon whispers nightly prayers
before the sun awakes to overflow the day with light
The moon is the stars storyteller and
sings a lullaby to bring all children to a slumber
It witnesses all night activity
as a sliver of silver in the sky
The moon brings restless animals
to their hunting hour and
see all lowering their sleepy eyelids.
2) The Moon whispers it nightly prayers
before the sun awakes to overflow the day with light
It is the stars storyteller and
and sings a lullaby to bring all children to a slumber
It witnssas all night activity as a sliver of silver in the sky
and sees all lowering their eyelids
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I like both honestly i got a little bit confused to say but i would go with 2-trix
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Q: I've written a few books and I just LOVE to write. So many things and idea's I could put. I also love to be noticed for great things i do. I really want maybe one of my books to be published or known. I'd like to submit it but I don't know where to. That's why I need your help can someone tell me somewhere I could submit a book to? Please!
~Desperate for fame~
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I'd go to a big city for that sort of stuff.. sounds gay but maybe you could askjeeves or google ***trix***
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Q: She's trapped inside her own world of sins
She can't get out, but she never wanted to get in
No one seems to notice, they just pass on by
Everyday she puts on her best smile, never wanting to start to cry
She's ashamed of everything she's ever put herself through
If she could only start over again, there's things she would not do
She never really wanted to be that kind of girl
But it was just so easy to fall into that world
Her world just keeps on falling down, around her like a thick cloud
She can't even see a thing, can't even hear a sound
Her skin crawls with angst, not knowing what to expect
She's afraid to open her eyes, afraid of what she might see next
She'd huddled in a corner, wrapping herself in her arms
Trying to block whatever it is that might put her in some harm
A single tear rolls down her cheek, the one she's tried so hard to block
She's tried to find the key, the one to open up the lock
She never wanted to be bad, but never wanted to be good
She doesn't know which way to go even though she should
The girl looks deep inside her own reflection, to see what she can find
But all she sees is false hope and deception, it's what she's trying to hide
But, you wonder, how I see all those things you can not see
It's a secret I've tried to hold dear, but that little girl is me
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Thats good interesting.. but good-trix
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Q: how did i become a moderator for this site
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Q: the weather man said
to expect showers
a purple umbrella lies abandoned on the ground
wet hair and clothes
let it pour
forget the heart ache and the lonesomeness
and the reason why I'm sore
every inch of my skin is drenched
the rain hides the tears
cheap mascara runs
and so do I
let it pour
flash back and I'm five years old
yellow rain coat and brunette waves
but here I am
the same, yet a little less sane
Not dancing, or singing, but drowning in the rain
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I like that i could picture it in my head so it was a visual poem... i like that keep them coming because i would like to read more of yours-trix
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Q: life is lonleyness
death is happieness
for me this is what i feel
thoughts of suicide
day and night
should i make teh cut
or use those tylenol pills
rope sounds good
but the gun maybe faster
there are many more ways
that i could say
but the one for me is not today
for i will be strong
for who knows how much longer
many times i cant go on
so a cut here
a cut there
to help me on
now my wounds
will have some time to heal
though the thoughts are still
waking me up at night
i am strong
but for how long
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If thats true.. i would seek help soon!! ask a parent or a close friend cuz i dont think thats what you really want-trix
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Q: Everytime
Everytime you ignore me , my heart shatters
Everytime I see you with Her , I break inside
Everytime you treat me just like a little girl , I feel disappointed in you
You treat me like a game
I’ve sacrificed so much just to be seen worthy in your eyes
Why can’t you do the same ?
I can’t take it anymore ,
I try to break away ,
But I stay firmly bonded to you ,
You’re torturing me more and more each day
Everytime I smile you you ,
You just turn away ,
If you never loved me ,
Why did you have to play ?
Did you ever consider what I thought
Can’t you tell you just threw my heart away
What do you have to say for yourself
Because it’s your fault
I can’t take it anymore ,
I try to break away ,
But I stay firmly bonded to you ,
You’re torturing me more and more each day
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Interesting but cool-trix
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Q: "Run Away"
Run, run, run away.
Run away for it’s just begun.
Nothing is left to learn; nothing can be done.
Run away and never return.
Don't let it burn just,
Run, run, run away.
Don't confront the fears.
Run away and leave the tears.
Don't retreat.
It'll show defeat, so just,
Run, run, run away
"Life"
So much anger; so much sadness.
How'd I get myself wound up in all this madness?
To much stress; to much drama.
How do I clear up this mess?
So many tears; so little fears.
It's been like this for years.
Just young; trying to have fun.
Not many smiles; not many dreams.
All I hear are distant screams.
Lot's of fights; including sleepless night.
I'm trying...
But there's so much lying; so much crying...
"I am"
People say I'm a sinner.
But I'm just a beginner.
Yea, I've done some things wrong.
But that's what makes me strong,
I take life for how it is.
I live my life around the people I adore.
I am who I am; why do they care?
Why do they always sit and stare?
I know I'm not the worst,
But I am the first to stand up and say,
I am who I am.
- Are these any good? Be honest please!! And if you don't like them or would change something about them tell me!
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I like them all I really like the first one i showed my friend that one i thought it was pretty good keep up the work!! I would like to see more of your work!! so keep em coming!! -trix
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Q: My heart once was broken Untill I found you...
You took my heart,
You took some glue,
You put it back together,
And I thank you.
If I had a choice to live or die by your side,
I would die in an instant.
"Just Die"
I sit here cold and lonely,
I hear you whisper,
I hear you cry,
Why cant you just die?
You're my fears,
You're my tears,
I can see you here,
You're everywhere,
I can't stop what I have begun,
My Love is endless,
It's driving me insane!
Please turn out the lights,
Fade away into the dark,
I can't stop,
I love you,
I hate you,
I need you,
I Breathe you
GO AWAY.
"Disapear"
I've fallen down below,
I know you wish I wasnt here,
It's too late,
I made the mistake,
I gave in, Death is not my fear?!
Dont cry, I was sapposed to die,
Close your eyes and it will all disapear.
"You left me here"
Im crying,
Im laying here dying,
You let go, you left me behind,
I've cried long enough,
I tried to get you,
I tried to show you,
I was ignored,
and this night you'd wish u didnt leave me here,
Don't let me cry alone, dont let me die alone.
"Lost voice"
I tried to speak the words wouldnt come out.
I tried to tell you how much I love you and that I care.
I wnated you to know I wanted to say the words but my mouth forced them back in.
Losing the words to say, my mind is caving in.
I need to tell you these things if only I could, I would.
"You Let Go"
I felt your grip,
You held me tight,
Untill tonight,
I feel myself slipping away,
Dont try to save me,
Why would u want to?
You were the one who let go.
I have more... I'll add em later!!
By- MyNightmarex666
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I really like alll them!! they are awesome!! send me all yours!! you got talent and no doubt about it!! *trix*
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Q: How do you publish your own stories?
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You have to go to a company and they'll take you step through step im assuming-trix
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Q: When i go over to my friends there is nothing to do so i need some ideas!! ( i am a girl and so is my friend so dont give us any perveted things)!!
thanxs!!!
~*RiSs*~
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Go outside draw chalk rearrange her room scrap books or something or talk about old memories or look at pictures *trix*
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Q: does anybody know where i can get my poems published? for free?
i've already been published by poetry.com, and american poets society, but i'm looking for some new places... got any ideas?
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Q: NO MORE
You laugh at me. You point, you say "how Weird" you say "how Ugly" you say "how Stupid".
I turn the other cheek so you can just laugh and point some more.
I have cryed my tears. I have hated myself for you.
I will always be here and you can't change that.
You will never make me feel bad again. NEVER!
So you better give up!
When I see you I laugh and say "How Pathetic!".
You have put me through this to make yourself feel good.
No More.
I have cryed my tears. I have hated myself for you But no more.
K.J.B.
Hi all advicenators! This is the only peom I have been able to write in the last 4 months and I was wondering if this is a good poem. i also want to know if I did all punctuation right? please answer it would be helpful.
K.J.B.
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I've seen better... but i defintly have seen way worse so on a scale 1-10 .. 1 being bad and 10 being good i give you a 6-trix
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Q: i know i've put you through alot of hell
i know you've tired so hard to break this timing spell
all the things that i've done wrong
all the things i've done for so long
how can i ever say im sorry for all the pain
you've been my shelter through all the rain
you were always there to show you care
and i pretended as if u werent there
i don't know the words to say
the words you've told me to help me find my way
all of the drugs and drinking
made me feel alone wondering and thinking
if you still felt the same
or if i had made you forget my name
if only you could see how much i love you
and believe me that everything i say is true
i know i've lost all your trust
but i will regain it oh how i must
i want you to think of me as ur little gurl again
your broken heart i will try to mend
i know its going to be hard to think of me the same
and i know mommy that i must change
i just wanted to be grown and act l ike an adult
and i know all things i did, u believed it was ur fault
i just want you to know that no matter what i will always care
i'll be right beside you juss to let u know im there
i will do anything in my power to to take away all the pain
help you grow...and help you gain
you've helped me so now its my turn
to help you out, to help you learn
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Q: Not enough, but so much,
Not enough guts to make that cut,
But yet so much, so much pain,
Within myself, im so insane,
Within that knife holds all happiness,
To give my arm that little kiss,
Within my grasp, I hold that blade,
Dying to cut, dying to staine,
I hold it in, but let it go,
To the floor i fall, only to show ,
That i had enough guts,
To make that sweet, simple cut.
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bio
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My name is Trix, I am 17. I love pink, and degrassi.
I just recently got out of a relationship of 21 months. I love him still but I'm moving on.
I've been there done that im sure
ex. (with the number of expierences)
-Long term relationships (2)
-Bad expierence with BF's family (1)
-Broken bones (11)
-Stitches (2)
-Seen someone killed (1)
-Loss of family (1)
-Cancer in the family (2)
-Family in Iraq (1)
-Mom had brain surgery (2)
-Loss of pet (4)
-Moved from state to state (5)
-New highschool (2)
-Car accident (3)
Like I said "been there done that"
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Info
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Gender: Female Age: 17 Member Since: June 3, 2004 Answers: 3661 Last Update: December 20, 2009 Visitors: 221990
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