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is this a good poem?
i made it up:
once there was a boy
he lived by the shore
he played with a toy
man, he was a bore!
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lol its short and cute...-trix
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Sorry to say this but...
IT SUCKED...
Do u seriously think thats poetry? "good" poetry at that?
You should of never posted it
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that's cool
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That's cute. It doesn't say a lot though, you could turn it into a limerik.
Awesome Job
Lizzy
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Its more a ditty, and a bad one at that. Just becuse it rhyms doesn't make it a poem. You need to try exploring your emotions and thoughts to create good poetry.
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its okay but honestly it was not all that. say if u made a book of poems and u gave me a poem out your book and you gave me that poem i would not buy it.
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nah.. It kind of sucked
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