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She's trapped inside her own world of sins
She can't get out, but she never wanted to get in
No one seems to notice, they just pass on by
Everyday she puts on her best smile, never wanting to start to cry
She's ashamed of everything she's ever put herself through
If she could only start over again, there's things she would not do
She never really wanted to be that kind of girl
But it was just so easy to fall into that world
Her world just keeps on falling down, around her like a thick cloud
She can't even see a thing, can't even hear a sound
Her skin crawls with angst, not knowing what to expect
She's afraid to open her eyes, afraid of what she might see next
She'd huddled in a corner, wrapping herself in her arms
Trying to block whatever it is that might put her in some harm
A single tear rolls down her cheek, the one she's tried so hard to block
She's tried to find the key, the one to open up the lock
She never wanted to be bad, but never wanted to be good
She doesn't know which way to go even though she should
The girl looks deep inside her own reflection, to see what she can find
But all she sees is false hope and deception, it's what she's trying to hide
But, you wonder, how I see all those things you can not see
It's a secret I've tried to hold dear, but that little girl is me
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Thats good interesting.. but good-trix
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i loved that poem and it feels like it relates 2 my life right now!!!!...excellent job!!!!
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The aspect is quite good, but I have to say it does drag on just about forever, and it doesn't flow right.
You need to use less words; try a thesaurus. And good luck with your next poem.
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Wow...that's sad. Sad, but good. Very good! But is it really you that you're talking about? Awesome job! :)
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that was an okay poem i hope you write poems for assemblies
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I think I answered your other poem. Im guessing that all these poems are yours and i'm not going to answer all but i really do like them. they are real feelings not fake. I like this poem too because I have these probs too. not this deep but I don't want ot be bd but i don't want to be good. well i have turned all good.and its hard because I want to be some thing else but it seems like i can't. remember you can. you can.
if you need help talk to people. nayone.
my e-mail is kutekrushkat@yahoo.com
sincerely
Kat
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Never believe that you are trapped in your own world of sin . Look at it from my perspective: "If you built this world of sin, you can tear it down . I'm not saying it will be easy,but you have to try". Always believe in repentance,and never forget that God loves you no matter what you do . Have faith in God . It will help in the long run trust me . Also remember no one is perfect . Everyone screws up . So no one has the right to pass judgement on you .
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