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i picked this out to show a girl how much i care what do you think?
I'm not sure if you know or not
But I really do love you a lot.
You still hold a special place in my heart
And you did, right from the start.
But when he came along and took your breath away,
I was devastated and didn't know what to say.
I spend my nights crying, time after time,
I spent my days lying, saying I was fine.
Little did you know, my heart was crushed inside,
And on that day, a little of me died.
But with her, you look so in love
'Cause you are an angel from above.
I now have to teach my heart to move on,
For, you are now forever gone.
But about one thing I am unsure:
Why it can't be me, and not him?
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Yeah, she'll know how much you care, A little too much! Unless she really likes you back already, you'll probably just scare her.
And if she's with a boyfriend, that's probably not the case.
Sorry to disappoint you, you'd think that romantic stuff works, but it usually doesn't.
I've been there, on both sides, and when i've gotten something like that, a poem or letter or whatever, it's usually just scared me.
"Who needs someone, who needs someone?"
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One problem
"But with her, you look so in love"
Change it to him =). So then it could look like
"But with HIM, you look so in love."
Unless i read it wrong & it's suppose to be like that...
But other then that, ITS FUCKING CUTE!!
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Whoa, my gosh. If she doesn't fling herself into your arms immediately after reading this, there's something wrong with her.
That's so... sweet and sad, and wonderful - coming from a guy! That's beautiful.
I'm sure she'll see it too.
-FunnyCide
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that is so good. i wish a guy would do that for me. what you need to do is give this to her. no reason not to. if she doesnt see that your a better choice. then you need to move on. im single check out my page and let me know. lol. but seriously. hope i helped. xoxo.. hotrod
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that's really cute.
i do agree with someone who said change love to like.
But with her, you look so in love
do you mean, but with him?
i think it's really cute, but she will feel really bad. =(. it definitely gets the point across and is very honest. you never know. i'd go for it! =).
good luck. and don't worry if it doesn't work out. a guy who is willing to take the time and put the thought into writing something like that is really someone special. you'll have no trouble finding another sweet girl if you need to.
just one question: did you pick it out somewhere or write it yourself? i wasn't sure. even if you did just pick it out, you are still putting a lot of thought into it and that's awesome.
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AWWW!Thats really really good!!!! i think that she would LOVE it and i think thats one of the sweetests thinkgs a guy could do for a girl
Hope i HElped
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Wow. That is really touching. I am guessing you liked a girl and someone else got her instead of you and she took a piece of your heart. I think that it's really, extremely good.
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oMG! guys dont rezalize how much girls like that kidn of stuff! you are such a sweetie! i wish more guys would do that! awww... its soOo adoRabLe!
xOxO, aL
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Aww that is so sweet.
I'm sure she will just love it!
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that is really sweet. i'm sure she'd love it. i know i would if i was her. :D And i like how its honest and very caring.
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Aw, I think that's that sweetest thing in the world. It's so adorable. I'm sure she'll love it. ♥
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Aw!
Personally, I think its adorable.
Anything a guy writes and takes the time to write is cute, if its from the bottom of your heart. Plus, it rhymes and its not WAY overly sappy. Im sure she'll love it. Its EXTREMELY thoughtful of you to do that.
I wouldnt say no to that!
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I think that it's really cute! She'll love it
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Aww, I think that's adorable!! She will love it. I think that you should change love into like because love is a very strong word and you shouldn't be using it unless you REALLY mean it. :)
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