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Is this poem OK?
people always tell me i'm not like others,
i don't fit in with the preps and am not like the brothers,
I like to listen to Aerosmith and P.O.D,
Is there any other way i should be?
I don't have a certain way to dress,
For someone i hardly know to impress,
I don't watch movies about cheerleaders,
And i hardly go to the movie theatres,
I just am myself and no one can change my rep,
Except maybe good old johnny depp
That last verse was a joke
Pleez rate the poem 1-10. Thank you
Lizzy
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i give ur poem a 10. it's very in-depth and you bring ur emotions to life. you have seriousness with a hint of humor. it's very well organized. good job
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I'll give it a 7. Before you give this number any thought in comparison to the other ratings, know that I'd give my own a 6. My work isn't terrible, so this is good. Above average for your level. And even though the last one was a joke, given the situation I bet he could change your rep. With the exception of Johnny Depp (Who I think is a great actor by the way), Aerosmith (I don't like much of there stuff. Dream on was a good song), and POD (I'm more of a VOD fan), this poem almost described me in high school.
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lol i give you an 8.5. its cute and the mention on johnny depp ( hoooootttttttt) wowza. liked it :)
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10 it good and diff. i like that! keep writting and share them with me please-trix
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10 hehe i like it!!x0x0 Kay
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i like it!! i give it an 8! *hope i helped* <3/Dakota
[RaTe Me PlEaSe AnD iF yOu NeEd Ne ThInG eLsE jUsT dROp oNe In My InBoX]
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its really good. i thought the ending was really funny. anyways keep up the good work..:)
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i would give it a 8 1/2 i thought it was very good!!!
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Johnny Depp could change me anyday.. Hes a cool guy.. i like how he stays in character hah.. its soo cool.. and hes a very good actor.. gets killed by freddy kruger in his first movie.. and guess what.. NOW HE IS A SUPERSTAR..
KYLE
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I give it a 9 and a half.I liked that it was very expressive.And the last line made me laugh alot.
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I think a 10 because first, you write really well, if this poem is about you, I think thats really cool that you are your own person. Thats awesome! But, I like the poem a lot because it expresses a lot about you (if it is about you lol). So good job!!
xoxo Kourtney
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It was original, but a bit stereotipical. 7 and a half.
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8
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its good!!!! 8 1/2
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lol thats really cute... 10 :-)
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i give it a 9
Love Ashley
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