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Hey Everyone :) I'm Kate and a level 2 mod on here. I've had this account since July 2004, so I've been on here since I was 13! Wow ... crazy for me to think how long ago that was. I will admit I don't check in as often as I once did, but being away at college, being in a sorority, and having a job when I'm not at school is very time consuming. I still try to help out as much as possible, and if you send me a question I WILL answer it. This site helped me a LOT when I was in high school and had a lot of questions, and I'm here to help anyone who needs it :) Feel free to write in my forum or send me a question any time!
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Can anybody help me with my esssay, like..give me website helpers on the topic or give me starting sentences and some endings?
The topic is: Why should the government support legislation that supports catholic schools?
i would like to win, but i do not know how to start and end it. so thanks in advance!
NEVER EVER say "in conclusion" for an ending, nor should you ever use personal pronouns (I, you, your, etc.). They should just KNOW it's your opinion without you saying so.
You'll need a thesis statement. That is one sentence that basically sums up what you will be arguing your paper on. An example if you want them to support Catholic schools: The (I assume) United States government should pass legistlatuer allowing them to support Catholic schools; (after the semi colon give 3 very good reasons why).
In your introductory you will want your first sentence to be something very catchy that will hold interest. Either a quote, question, statistic, etc. Then you'll give another few sentences. Lastly, your thesis. You don't have to make your thesis the last sentence but it makes it easier for the reader to pick it out.
You'll need to use transition words to go from paragraph to paragraph (therefore, however...)
The body paragraphs should have one topic each. Don't mix them all in together it will get confusing. If your paper was on the different factors influencing a persons style then paragraph one could be about the influences from celebritites, paragraph two could be how peers influence it and paragraph 3 could be about how family influences it. Then you would want a nice conclusion to wrap it all up. Once again, NEVER say "... in conclusion..." it's NOT a good way to end a paper. They should know it is coming to an end through a good transition word and through the content of your paper. What you want to do is, in one to two sentences, sum up what your paper was on. If there was an issue at hand then you want to (again, in 1-2 sentences) resolve that issue. You won't have to completely restate your thesis but you should somehow toss it back in the conclusion. Make sure your last sentence of the conclusion is just as good as the first of your introduction.
Here is a site that will probably make more sense that I did. I found the site not too long ago when I had to write a very important paper (one that determined whether or not I would graduate) and I made a perfect score, 100, on the paper.
http://helpwithyouressay.com/index.php
(Rating: 5) thank you so much, you helped me tons & thanks to you i might win =)