BeautifulMadness's advice column

I can write poems tell me what you think of this one
Alone
alone is where no one is there
you try to see but blind by glare
glare of your own soul and glare of your heart and then you realize that thers no start
you have no body or no friends you
relize now this might be the end u
nless you change whats inside t
his might be how you die
try to run but theres no escape
try to hide but you still wont wake
the darkness is everywhere
you cant see
blinded by you
and blinded by me

It's really good!! It's got some amazing meaning behind it and some really powerful words in it. Although I would suggest using spell check or something; at least using proper words ('you' and 'u') or your poems won't be taken seriously by people such as publishers. Just a tip!

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(Rating: 5) i know i suck at spelling

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