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what does anyone think of my...
I can write poems tell me what you think of this one
Alone
alone is where no one is there
you try to see but blind by glare
glare of your own soul and glare of your heart and then you realize that thers no start
you have no body or no friends you
relize now this might be the end u
nless you change whats inside t
his might be how you die
try to run but theres no escape
try to hide but you still wont wake
the darkness is everywhere
you cant see
blinded by you
and blinded by me
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thats good.. i write poems too but just so you know.. i wouldnt put my poem up unless its copyrighted cuz anyone could steal it and act like its theirs.. just so you know but its really good and something you should persue in the future
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First of all, use correct spelling...
And, its alright, I can see the effort in it, but its kind of mixed up. I suggest going to www.poets.com, you have to pay for it, I think its 5.95 a month, but its worth it. You can post poems, and then people can rate it and give you feedback on it. Its a really great site, and if you like to write poems, I really suggest you try it out, it helps a lot.
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you're too emo, unless is that what you were going for?
^ emo is kind of depressing stuff, just short for emotional.
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[Link](Mouse over link to see full location) it says there that you shouldn't ask those questions, it will be deleted. and i think it's okay.
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It's really good!! It's got some amazing meaning behind it and some really powerful words in it. Although I would suggest using spell check or something; at least using proper words ('you' and 'u') or your poems won't be taken seriously by people such as publishers. Just a tip!
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beautiful.......u are really good at writing poems...... i have acouple of my own
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hey! that is one really good poem! i love reading peoples work... if you have anymore poems or anything like that i think you should join up to www.deviantart.com this is where people who have artistic talents put on their work and let other people read and judge it. it is a great way to improve your work and for it to get noticed (there are a lot of publishers that use it!!) hope i helped :)
~*~Lucee~*~ plz cld u rate me if i deserve it thanks xXx
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thats awesome! i write peoms too! im trying to write a book of poems and try to get it published! that rocks though! keep up the good work! love ya
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That's brilliant! I don't know too many people who can write poems and don't end up sounding like Dr.Suess in the end. Way to go!
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