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hows this
ok if your a lord of the rings fan you might get this but you might anyway.
into the south
int othe south we go
through danger we do not know
we'll give it our best
to finish our quest
with only a sword and bow
to mordor we must fly
where darkness fills the sky
throught dark shadows and mirk meadows
the end of all comes nigh
--- ok i know thats not that good but how do yall like it?---
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I think it's great. :0) Keep up the good work. - Jen
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I fell asleep in the movie, but I do like your poem. It's not really my taste, through. Either way, it's nice. :) Write more, post more, you know there are art fourms? If you want, I can give them to you. :)
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It is very good. I LOVE LOTR!
*~Random Kitty~*
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It's not bad but I prefer poems that are about real life happenings but this isn't bad. Honestly, very good and it fits in with LOTR. Keep up the good work!
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i actually think i have sum talent, i've seen 2 of the movies, so i did understand it rite away, im not really a fan, but i've seen them
it's a good poem!!
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that is the awesomest poem about LOTR i have ever heard. u rock, and keep writing!!
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thats great! be more confident with your poems! i love lord of the rings!
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Not that good...?That was an awesome poem!I have actually seen other peoples poems about Lord of the Rings but that was like top 3! Good Job!
Keep Writing
*Lacey
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Thats awesome you should add more! keep up the good work :D
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you should post more
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Its a bit sing-songy, like a ballard. The rhyming is really dull, and its kinda short for how long the books are.
But its a good start.
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It was GREAT! I luved it. Keep up the good work.
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I THINK IT IS GOOD IT IS KOOL
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Looks good to me...Good job!
<3 Keep it up!
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I don't watch Lord Of The Rings. But I really liked that poem and I'm blonde and I get the poem lol. Its really good, I really liked it. So keep on writting and posting them, I'll read them =D I love poems haha. Good job on it! And you have to be positive, I think its a great poem and here you are saying its not that good lol. Don't say that because its a great poem =D
xoxo Kourtney
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I do like it even though i dont like lord of the rings but i understand it though-trix
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It's nice. I'm a big fan of the extended versions of the movies, but I have yet to read the books. I know, I'm missing a lot.
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