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What do you think?
Look no further, this is real.
I express the way I feel.
I am proud that I am me.
I am what I want to be.
I feel used; I feel alone.
I feel upset; I want to groan.
I feel hurt; I feel deprived.
I feel angry; I hate lies.
I feel hunger; I feel pain.
I feel like I have gone insane.
I feel happy, I’m all smiles.
At least for just a little while,
I put my true feelings away
To face another lonely day.
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THIS IS REALLY GOOD! If you got anymore, send them to my inbow plez. I love this! *BROOKIE* rate me plez!
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Its really CCOOLL!!
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Thats really good! Because I'm sure many people feel like that, I can relate to most of these poems haha. But keep up the good work and keep posting them!
xoxo Kourtney
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WHOA....
Not only is this a really great poem but exactly what im feeling in my life right now!
Way to go...and keep on writing,your doing great!
*Lacey
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Before I say anything, I think you are young. Am I right? It's very good for a young person's work. It sounds like an honest piece, but I don't know your age. I can't honestly criticize it without knowing how far along you are in writing.
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Wow, This is just.....True. This is how I feel almost all the time, I have to put the "Happy face" for all to see when I know that it's not me and I want to scream. This is a wonderfull poem, you have talent. Oh, what is the name??
You should put it on iether fictionpress.com or poetry.com, they'er both good sites.
Keep up the good work.
Sincerely
advice~gurl
kat
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<span style="background: url([Link](Mouse over link to see full location); You are such a good poet!! Hehe. I think everyone can relate to that in some way. I know for me that it reminds me of years I had a long time ago, I felt like some of the things your descibed. But yeah I really love your poem! Never give up what you have for writing, you are excellent at it!! Love you! -Mandee </span>
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you probably don't want to do that. keeping your real feelings bottled up often leads to depression and even suicide. just let it out sometimes. let people see what you're really made of even if you don't want to. you can't stay falsely happy for the rest of your life. even if you just tell one friend about how you really feel, you can lean on their support, and even if it takes a long time, you'll be able to heal.
~accolade~
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good poem
but if that's how ya really feel, im sorry
and i hope ya cheer up
i'd ratha u be like dis :)
then like this :'(
Hope I Helped
SoUtHeRn_ChIcKeTy
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thats very good keep writing!! I can follow through with what its saying and it makes sense unlike half the people that put stuff up here so i give you 2 thumbs up!!-trix
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=( I'm sorry. Hope you feel better soon.
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