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He loves her right?
She was so pretty..
He had such great teeth
She pushed him away
He didn't stay
But she knew he'd come back
So she could lay her head..
on his warm lap
But he never did
and so she bled
For every inch that peirced her thin
weary, tired, aching skin
she thought of him
But he wasn't there to dry her tears
or wipe up the crimson blood that stained
The knife she had
For every sapphire tear she shed
she would cut that much deeper
and so she bled
Girls like her just didn't slice
There flesh with kitchen knifes
The cold metal felt like ice
She was so pretty
and so was he
She didnt think this through right
she peirced her flesh instead
pretty cheerleader just broken inside
and so she bled
Last breath, what's left to say?
She thought of him
Her life was just one big cliche
Tragic story ending with a broken heart
She remembered everything he said
but he's gone now..
and so she's dead.
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Thats a really good poem and its sad! I really like it, you did really good on. Good job! Keep adding more I love reading them!! =P
xoxo Kourtney
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Wow, this is just... wow. It's sad but to be honest I prefer poems that more true and painful than the rosy perfect poems. because these are real. You have real talent alot more than me. I'm not that good at poems or anything for that manner.
Good job, WOW.
sincerely
advice~gurl
kat
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O my goodness! what a beautiful and well wrote poem. u could make alot of money of of that,lol. but seriously, have u ever thought of writing a book or something? i can really hook u up.that is very good 4 a 14 yr old. u must be very smart and with no doubt, talented. good luc.
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Oh my god, that was so good! It's kind of depressing about the girl..but you did such a great job writing that! Like I've said a million times, I wish I had that talent. Great job, I loved it! Love you!- Mandee
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Thats pretty good... very... idk the word im looking for but its very ... good job-trix
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Wow, that is an awesome poem, even if there are spelling errors! lol keep it up :)
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