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i dont like to whine,but cut myself burn myself bruise myself am bullied and have depression and i wrote this poem about it and ive suffered with self harm for about 4 years and i would like to have feedback on whether or not its any good....sorry there sad
Words hurt
and no razor can take that away from me
my sleeves were
once white but now stained red
the truth burns
more than any match can tell
i hide
behind the blood and the bruises
i worry that
some day someone will see through me
and ill have to face the scars
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The poem is a very good one.
But more importantly, have you sought therapy?
I don't know, or pretend to know what you have gone through in life. But I do know that there are people that are there to help you, without judging you.
You can confidentially seek professional help through a therapist, councilor (both available through schools), a psychiatrist, or psychologist.
You can go to your family doctor and they can refer you, or you can go to your school and ask to speak to someone.
Again, this is perfectly normal and you will not be judged. Just remember that things have a way of getting better!
In regards to the poem, once again, it's very deep. Good work.
Good luck! :)
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i have sought therapy and thanks for the advice
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