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My name is Kat but you can just call me AG since thats what I'm known as here.
I've been on Advicenators since about December of 2003. I give advice to the extent of my knowledge. Sometimes that can be very little but I'm honest and I'll try to help you the best I can.

If you want to ask me a question thats what the button is for that says "ask Advice~gurl a question".

AG

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*~Confesions*~
You say you wanna be true with me
So you start confessing
Befor you start already a tear drops down
You confess everything
It feels like my heart broke
Tears are pouring down
I say how can you do this to me
He says Im sorry
I know Its over
I say Its over
Even though i know i did the right thing
I still love him
But i cant trust him
He lost y trust
So now its over
Maybe someday
My tears will go away.

Wow, now this is a real poem. you can really feel how you felt. I totally like.
Crazy
A lonely girl wonders why she feels so broken hearted.
He doesn't feel the same and her heart is split in two.
She feels like a fool.
She holds her head as high as she can.
She crys and crys. Wonders why?
"Am I too ugly? am I too loud? Or is he just crazy?"
She crys and crys. Wonders why?
with tears in her eyes she smiles and says, "HE IS JUST CRAZY!"
I am not the one in the wrong, HE IS JUST CRAZY!

^^that one is mine. I wrote it when I felt like you did in a way.

keep up the great writing, you have huge talent.

Poetry.com or fictionpress.com are both really good websites to put your poems and stories on. I like fanfiction because you can get reviews on your poems. poetry.com just publishes if they like.

Sincerely
advice~gurl
kat

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(Rating: 5) good peom!!!


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