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*~Confesions*~
You say you wanna be true with me
So you start confessing
Befor you start already a tear drops down
You confess everything
It feels like my heart broke
Tears are pouring down
I say how can you do this to me
He says Im sorry
I know Its over
I say Its over
Even though i know i did the right thing
I still love him
But i cant trust him
He lost y trust
So now its over
Maybe someday
My tears will go away.
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great poem
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Awww :( ya know it reminds me of myself and my ex boyfriend.... STUPID GUYS!! THEY ALL SUCK! hehe just joking boys! :) I'm totally guy crazy so dont think i hate ya'll! :-D
-holly-
keep up the good work
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Wow, now this is a real poem. you can really feel how you felt. I totally like.
Crazy
A lonely girl wonders why she feels so broken hearted.
He doesn't feel the same and her heart is split in two.
She feels like a fool.
She holds her head as high as she can.
She crys and crys. Wonders why?
"Am I too ugly? am I too loud? Or is he just crazy?"
She crys and crys. Wonders why?
with tears in her eyes she smiles and says, "HE IS JUST CRAZY!"
I am not the one in the wrong, HE IS JUST CRAZY!
^^that one is mine. I wrote it when I felt like you did in a way.
keep up the great writing, you have huge talent.
Poetry.com or fictionpress.com are both really good websites to put your poems and stories on. I like fanfiction because you can get reviews on your poems. poetry.com just publishes if they like.
Sincerely
advice~gurl
kat
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Awww..lol..you should go to www.poetry.com I got my poems published there and they are like in a very nice book. And yeah just go and publish because that was cute! *x0x*Stephanie
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Thats a good poem i have to say you should maybe think about getting your poems published or something like that i have my poem published in the Golden book of poems but the whole line of I know Its over I say Its over you should put something inbetween that i dont know what but its to close Like I already know its over I dont want to imagine us being apart but i have to say its over before i get hurt anymore or something like that -trix
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omigosh.. your lyk SuPeR duUuuUpEr g0od at that.. i mean.. i write poems and stuff.. and they lyk.. suk compared to you.. ;).. eye rEaLLy thynk you shuud try and get em published..
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cute pOem...xoxo
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very nice :) xoxo effy
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WOW!
thats good!
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