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New song
Hey, can you guys listen to my song and tell me what you think.. And some adive also, if you have any
I'm kinda shy, so i'm not ready to share this with people I already know.
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The song's a bit dull, to be honest, but it's not horrible.
Your voice needs help though. It's very quiet and you slur your words, so I can't hear the lyrics at all. You sound like you'd be good if you were louder, but it is off-tune in a few spots. I'd recommend voice lessons if you're not already taking them.
I just read the lyrics, and I love them. I think you need a different melody though, less repetitive and a little more dramatic.
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i think it's very good, and it's a very well written song. the only thing is that you could turn the vocals up. i was struggling to hear them over the guitar. belt it out!
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I like the beat and everything but the singing needs work. Its very off tune at some times.
Hope i helped!
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First of all the music was great. The only thing is put more effort into them. Also it sounds like your to close to the microphone. Back away from the microphone a bit, and put more heart and soul into the song, and it would be awesome.
Hope I helped :)
- MCRxoLoVeR
P.S GREAT SINGING VOICE!!!
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That's quite okay. :] I'm not saying you're a bad singer though at all, just so you know. Just that you need to work on it a little more. Don't worry about the shyness either, that will pass in time but do stick with it. It takes a lot of courage to sing and have people listen to it, even complete strangers, so do stick with it. I'd love to hear your next try. :]
The music and such is awesome. The only drawback is the vocals. They were okay but I think you can do a lot better. :] For starters you have to try and avoid singing them like you're reading them from paper. Really sing them and put some feelings into the words. It's hard to describe what I mean but if you listen to a few song and look at the lyrics at the same time you'll hopefully see what I mean. :] Don't stop though whatever you do. I liked it, just a little tweak with the vocals and you'll be there. :D If you do re-do it by all means send me a linky to it and I'd be more than happy to check it out again.
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I really liked it.
Except, I agree with the person below me, you kind of sound like you're talknig more than singing. Other than that I honestly can say I really liked it. You're guitar playing was really nice. And I read the lyrics and liked them as well. Good luck =]
<3 Laura.
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Hey, the lyrics are nice,
and the guitar or whatever, the 'music' is good. But honestly, the vocals aren't that great. Its not like your singing, it kinda sounds like you're just talking.
But its really a great start :)
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