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My name is Jen, I go to school, and occasionally learn things. I love James Dean, Hanson, Sloppy Firsts and Second Helpings by Megan McCafferty, Fall Out Boy, Elton John and Billy Joel. These make me overly qualified to give advice ESPECIALLY since I spend the vast majority of my time watching and obsesing over Oprah.

I've been through some stuff, and watched even more drama on TV, so I can help with your problems, no matter what your story is Wishbone.

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ive been trying really hard since last week to write a 3 page research paper about lutheranism.

i have all of it finished except for the conclusion. it needs to be fairly long so i can meet the 3 page requirement and im not sure how to start it off.

can you give me any ideas on how to start a conclusion, or how to end one?

thanks in advance, i give 5s. (link)
Never ever ever ever start your conclusion with "in conclusion". EVER. It's like the biggest sin you can commit on an essay.

Anyways, I like to start my conclusions by restating my thesis in a different way. Say your thesis is "advicenators is a great site which their committment to quality advice, easy to use format and great advicenators prove" I'd start with something like "The quality advice given on advicenators coupled with their site which can be surfed with ease and overall great advice givers creates a great site" and then I'd go on to talk about the benefits of a great site in the long run, blah blah blah.

Not the greatest example, but hopefully you get the idea. I googled it, and the first two sites I clicked seemed to be helpful: http://www.google.ca/search?hl=en&q=how+to+write+a+conclusion&btnG=Google+Search&meta=


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