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poem~ ~Hate~~ please tell me what u think
Sometimes I wish I wasn't born mixed I like having diffrent cultures. But I get sick and tired of people always judging me by my color. or say i am a certain race because of how i act. I hate it when i have no friends in school cause they think i act fake. I hate it when people say i am a certain person when they know NOTHING about me. I hate that everytime i get into a serious relationship with someone i care about. it get's flushed down the drain. Just cause they want to believe something about me they heard from someone els instead of trying to get to know me.
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This world is cruel we dont have much of a judgement at our school towards races.. well not my old school anyways i dont know about my new school. Just say what your about before people can judge you be happy of who you are and not of what others want you to be just be who are you and not what people tell you to do or whatever and if this is a poem like you said good-trix
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be proud of what you are.. other people of just doing what the know.. there philosophy is " if you dont know then make fun of " tell them how you feel.. just be like im not fake.. im me.. dont judge me just get to know me
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i LOVE the poem...it is so good! but i think it is horrible how ppl treat ppl like that! im sorry that thats how u feel but it is CRUEL world out there n ppl r so mean! im sorry that thats how u get treated...i would NEVER treat u like that! hope it gets better for u! good luck! -angie
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i really like it. it seems very emotional to. keep up the great work...:)
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it doesnt have a format and it doesn't seem like a poem to me.
then again, maybe i'm just not poetic
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ok well here is my opinion.
I like it but you need to put it into a format like a poem. Change the words and make it sound more like a poem.
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i think that it has a good topic and all but u should really get it into a pom format. when u have it like that it just looks like a story. also i think that maybe getting a rythm would help too. sry if u dont like my advice.
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