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ok heres another one its called my body and soul As my mind and my body grows tired,
I find that my soul still remains strong,
Though I have come to the point to realize my fate,
To accept death as it slowly creeps up on me,
To accept the fact I will always be lonley,
To accept my life as it truly is,
And to accept the way things are
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good.. but write happier ones-trix ]
wow i luv it. it must be by far m favorite....keep up the great job..:) ]
that's really good .. i've personallu always loved writting and thats really good .. so u should keep writting .. mayb u can make a career out of it . good lUcK hope i helped =) ]
i like it.
kris ]
It's fine to post your poems, but could you please post them under the correct catagory, ie: writng. Thanks! ]
I like the other one better but this one is good too! ]
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