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Come on Come on
You know its time to go
it times to let go
there nothing to hold on to
gotta let go to get over it
we cant live in the past. there nothing we cand do change that.. oh come on come get ready let go its times to let go.. nothing nothing we can do and hold on to. I dont want to know I want to let go.. so can we go now.. (link)
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uuummm not to sound mean but i think it sort of sucks i mean i think u could do it a little better some words r missed spelled and some of the words need to be rewriten to go with the rest of she poems or rap or song what u r trying to do other than that it is otay i guess
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I'm not sure i got this poem sounding right; anyone please gimme a hand.
Fallen Hero
I looked up to a figure
I once deemed to be the best.
But as time slipped to the second,
My faith was put to the test.
Me hero was declined
Of his powerful throne,
Shoved to the side
And deprived of all he called his own.
I stood with the disappointed
Who late looked him on,
And surprisingly found myself
Not nearly as drawn.
As I turned my back,
Shaking my head,
He uttered his final words
And the next second he’s dead.
I found myself thinking twice
Of what I had once thought.
After hearing his words,
My attention, he begot.
“Take care of your hate,
“For soon you’ll regret
“For not helping the one
“To whom your actions were once set.
“Don’t be afraid of difference-
“That’s what makes us all unique.
“If we copied and begged sameness,
“Then all would be bleak.
“Cherish what you believe
“And this is the last I have to say:
“Don’t turn your back again
Like you’d done today.”
**!~Denice~!** (link)
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ok that was way awsome i totally liked it. u r really good there is this site called poetry.com u should go there and enter this poem. u can win money like tons of it well any way keep up the good work it was totally awsome if u have more e-mail me at mealation@aol.com
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I waz talkin on da phone with him...& i wuz about to he off....& he said ok iloveyou i paused 4 a min. & i didn`t want to hurt him so i said it back...but i totally didn`t mean it....i take iloveyou very serious!thats not the first time he has said that wut should i do?
~Joyful~ (link)
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well the next time he tells you he loves you ask him how can he love you what is that makes himm love you and does he really mean it or is he just saying that cause that is what he thinks you want to hear
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This girl Deanna R. always give me an attitude, but today i got really fed up. she started givin me an attitude because i had a qupte in my profile that she didnt like. So she starts threatining me to take it off. so i did. cuz i kno if u get her pisst off she'll throw a hissy fit and get a whole bunch of her friends to try to make my life shit. and i hate it. what should i do. i try as much as i can to avoid her, and ignore her rude comments but it really bugs me.
-nicole g (link)
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just tell her to bug off. Most people pick on other people when they know the other person wont do any thing. But as soon as you confront her she will be sure to back down. But remember they might take it the wrong way and it will end up badley well hope this helps and please rate me
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Hey everyone 15/m here. Well as you can tell from my title, I just lost a special friend of mine. We used to go out for 3 1/2 months 'til she broke up with me and we've been pretty good friends since then, 'til today. All of this started cause I sent her a text message saying I had sex with another girl, but I really didnt. I just wanted to get an honest reaction from her. And of course she got mad...real mad this time. *sigh* If I knew this would have happened, I would never had done it. I talked to her about it tonight and the end result was that she didn't want anything to do with me, ANYTHING. So I told her if she really wanted it to be that way, I would get rid of all my contacts with her, and I did. I went from maybe getting back together with her(heavy emphasis on maybe), to being absolutely nothing in her life. She just means so much to me that I don't want to lose her, I still wanna marry her if I could. I love her, but I don't think she has any for me anymore. I basically cried my heart out again. Does anybody know what I could do to get her back? I don't wanna lose my angel. ='( Help me please...Life is meaningless to me right now without her. (link)
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i went out with my best friend for 2 months. i love him with all my heart. But he told me that he had gottin drunk and had sex with his ex gurl friend. and laughed about it in my face i told him that i didnt give a fu** any more and that it was over. He told me that it was just a joke and that he wanted to know how i would react. So i told him what would he do if i told him i had sex with another huy while we were going out. i told him thathe was dead wrong for what he did and that i was sorry that i ever met him. He told me sorry like 5000000 times i told him that i really loved him and that he really hurt my feelings but i wanted to give him another chance because i really loved him. but he had to promise to never do any thing like that again. and he promised.
Tell her that you are really sorry and that you know you should have not lied to her like that and that you really love her with all her heart and that you want to spend the rest of your life with her if that was possible. and will she please give you one more chance and that if u screw up one more time you will never bother her again well i hope that work. i will love to hear if that helped and to know how things went and dont forget to rate me
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Emotions
I feel as if i'm outside myself watching life. It feels so stange, like a cat in new land.
YOu think I have no emotion, then you don't know me. If you could understand me, just listen you can hear my thoughts. The volume is always hight never quiet.
my smile is automatic, like a machine programed.
I want to tell you more, I want you to understand.
I don't know who I am. Too many voices. too many emotions.
I feel so lost! No one understands. I'm so insecure just waiting for your secure.
I reach out, I yell but my arms don't move not a sound escapes my mouth.
I'm so alone, So many voices, so many emotions....
Copyright ©2004 Kathleen Janette Bare
Is this a good poem? Let me know. I just wrote it.
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your poem iz awsome i was really into it i am aslo a poet if you want to enter your poetry onlie and try to win some money for it and get it published in a book then go to this site
www.poems.com and just look around and then type in your form and submit it
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I am 14 years old, 15 in 2 weeks.. and I just found out I'm pregnant! I cried for days.. my parents dont know yet and I dont know how to tell them...They said they would ALWAYS support me but I doubt they will now when Im not sure who the father is... how should i bring up the convo with my mom and dad? (link)
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well for one u aare kind of making me scared im only 15 and will be turning 16 soon and im scared that i might end up being pregnant too soon but the advice i have for you is. Just tell you parents that u made a big mistake. And that you are pregnant. Tell them you are not sure who the father is and that you are willing to take on the responsibility of takin care of a child of your own. But Just know this is not an aesy thing practice it a few times with some friend or if you are to afraid to confront your parents ask to spend the night over a friends house. and leave a note on there bed for them to read explaning every thing. by the time you get home they will kniw what is up and they would have talked about it. then it shouldent be so hard for you to find the right words to say
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Ok, so I like this guy and I wanna tell my mom, but I don't know how she's gonna react, because she overreacts to everything. One time I told her I liked a guy and she grounded me cuz she thought I was going out with him! If I tell her, Im afraid she'll do the same thing again, but I really like this guy and if I don't tell her, there's no way I'll ever be able to date him without her finding out!!! (link)
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the best thing to do is just to tell her. If you were to sneak around and she found out or heard it frome some one els then all that is going to do is make things worse. Then she would really get mad. and if the worse thing she could do is ground you then just take the punishment if you really like the guy he should be worth it. But simply tell your mom that you really like this guy and you would like to go with him with out it being a huge deal and that you think you are old enough to have a boy friend. But just remember she just want's the best for you so dont get out of controll.
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okay my bf like to go out with his friends alot and like is hardly with me ...cuz my parents dont like him..and he knos..but when he goes out hes allways with his friends, and i kno there are girls tyhere..and he tells me that he mets girls but didnt hook up with any of them..and im like yea right u kno?...so what should i do or tell him? should i brake up with him or waht do i do????! (link)
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tell him that u are feeling a bit insucure about the relationship since you are not really allowed to hang out. and maybe you guys can find a way to spend more time together.
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Hey! I have had my boyfriend for almost a year and I truly love him. He recently told me that we need to take it to the next step in our relationshop, and I am very scared of HOLDING HANDS! I've heard nasty things about holding hands, bacteria and even STD's! Everyone holds hands, is there a special protection they use?
Thank you! (link)
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well if u are scared to hold his hand just tell him that u are not up for it and just explain to him why there are pleanty of other things you can do besides holding hands
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ok, im 14 and i have been with my boyfriend almost 5 months and already we are in love!!! i mean i love being in love with him, i mean dont get me wrong its heaven, but i want to know if its too fast to let him put his hand in my back pocket? please help me! im probably overreacting but i just want to know what people think!
xoxo (link)
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well u being 14 try to remember that u r just getting in touch with your hormones and you are starting to like guys a bit more. But no one can tell you if u are moving to fast if u are ready to do some thing u will know. But if your not ready tell him to slow down a bit and that things are going a bit fast and u need time to catch your breath. ~~~~~~~GOOD LUCK
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Well there is this boy named Joseph and i really like him and so i have heard he likes me to we talked some he has come over the house a few times. and we have kissed a few times. But see he used to like my friend named jasmine and she dont like him he say he over her but i dont think so. How can i get him to ask me out with out me askin him?
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Well first thing first ask him does he really like you and is he really over the other gurl. If his answer is yes to all the question then you should have no barriers. Also keep this in mind the world wontend if u ask a guy out maybe u should try it. But if u still dont want to ask him out. Try talking to one of his friends and have them bring up the idea of him asking u out. It works most of the time. and good luck
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