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this sound more like a song or poetrys?
Come on Come on
You know its time to go
it times to let go
there nothing to hold on to
gotta let go to get over it
we cant live in the past. there nothing we cand do change that.. oh come on come get ready let go its times to let go.. nothing nothing we can do and hold on to. I dont want to know I want to let go.. so can we go now..
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A song, but quite a bad one. A song full of repition is one of the worse types. I say scrap the words, but not the idea, and start again.
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uuummm not to sound mean but i think it sort of sucks i mean i think u could do it a little better some words r missed spelled and some of the words need to be rewriten to go with the rest of she poems or rap or song what u r trying to do other than that it is otay i guess
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it sounds more like a poem than a song. its really good and it has a good beat to it. keep up the good work...rate me..,...:)
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That sounds like a song more than a poem, but who cares I liked it!! lol. I thought it was really good, because some people live in the past then trying to move on, so that poem really trys to push people to move on. I thought it was great! You did a great job on it! Good job! Keep writting!
xoxo Kourtney
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I think it sounds like a song more than a poem! Its pretty good! I think it sounds like Ashlee Simpson, if you know who she is! Keep it up!
LoVe,
HeAtHeR!
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