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poem/lyrics


Question Posted Tuesday April 22 2008, 10:24 pm

do u know any lyrics or poems that explain this
"we argued like we were together
we changed for one another.
we were honest and we lied.
we were open to each other.
we had a guiding hand.
we never failed to be there.
we laughed and we cried.
we loved and we hated.
we put each other first when we say we didn't.
we climbed to the top.
we tried way too hard.
we did all we could."

i know thats a poem in itself.
but im trying not to make it obvious :-X
or can you reword it for me?
im unsure. heh thanks!


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dudewearsurcar answered Wednesday April 23 2008, 3:12 pm:
so is this for a boy you are interested in? or maybe a break up and you want him back?
from what i get out of this, these songs come to mind:
what hurts the most- rascal flatts
best thing you never had- butch walker
have you ever- brandy
tired of you- the exies

basically, all these songs are about wanting someone or missing someone you can't have or did once have. i hope this helped.

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LOL_x0x answered Wednesday April 23 2008, 12:28 pm:
Thanks for inboxing, but you aren't supposed to ask questions like this on the site. I can't rewrite your poem for you. Sorry!
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-Laura. (15-f)


EDIT: I'm sorry you misunderstood, but using my rewrite of your poem would be plagarism anyways. And plagarism is illegal. We don't want a lawsuit now, do we? =]

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Cmilner1607 answered Wednesday April 23 2008, 4:17 am:
i don't know any poems myself for what you wrote.
but you could try this website, it's very useful.
thankyou, and hopefully you find a good one! :)

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iwantthetruth answered Wednesday April 23 2008, 12:46 am:
okay well i can try to rephrase it

we tried be there for one another
and be what the other needed
we tried to open our hearts to each other
and be the laughter that the other pleaded
it was wonderful and beautiful
climbing mountains together
utb somehow it all seemed too thought out
but all we could do is what we did do



I also thought of BUTTERFLIES by SIA but im not sure if it fits it exactly. =/

"We've been to the top, we've been to the bottom
We've known everything and forgotten, yeah

You've kicked me around, you've wrapped me in cotton
You've carried our load, and you've shot 'em

Oh yes the butterflies are still there
Oh yes the butterflies are still there

We've argued by the baggage claim
We've accepted and we've laid blame
We've drank Sangthip in monsoonal rain
We've felt separate and felt the same

Oh yes the butterflies are still there
Oh yes the butterflies are still there
Oh yes the butterflies are still there
Oh yes the butterflies are still there

We've shared joy and we've shared pain
We've shared guilt and we've shared shame
We've bought into the stupid games
We've freed each other and we laid claim

Oh yes the butterflies are still there
Oh yes the butterflies are still there
Oh yes the butterflies are still there
Oh yes the butterflies are still there

Because we came from the same cocoon"



hope i helped!! =]]]]]

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cloudy_conscience answered Tuesday April 22 2008, 9:29 pm:
My tears run down like razorblades
And no, I'm not the one to blame
It's you ' or is it me?
And all the words we never say
Come out and now we're all ashamed
And there's no sense in playing games
When you've done all you can do

But now it's over, it's over, why is it over?
We had the chance to make it
Now it's over, it's over, it can't be over
I wish that I could take it back
But it's over

I lose myself in all these fights
I lose my sense of wrong and right
I cry, I cry
It's shaking from the pain that's in my head
I just wanna crawl into my bed
And throw away the life I led
But I won't let it die, but I won't let it die

But now it's over, it's over, why is it over?
We had the chance to make it
Now it's over, it's over, it can't be over
I wish that I could take it back

I'm falling apart, I'm falling apart
Don't say this won't last forever
You're breaking my heart, you're breaking my heart
Don't tell me that we will never be together
We could be, over and over
We could be, forever

I'm falling apart, I'm falling apart
Don't say this won't last forever
You're breaking my heart, you're breaking my heart
Don't tell me that we will never be together
We could be, over and over
We could be, forever

It's not over, it's not over, it's never over
Unless you let it take you
It's not over, it's not over, it's not over
Unless you let it break you
It's not over

It's Not Over by Secondhand Serenade

I don't know if this is what you looking for, but it kind of reminded me of that poem.
If you want some different kind of things just send me another question.

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