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graduation speecch


Question Posted Monday May 21 2007, 4:32 pm

hey! so we have to write a graduation speechh ( graduating middle schoooll)

before reading my speech you should know..
- the theme is THE FUTURE IS STILL UNWRITTEN. MAKE YOUR MARK.
- my school is HBT / Thompson



As we graduate Thompson today, we reflect on the three years of growth and friendship we have experienced as a class. We arrived here in the fall of 2004 from our elementary schools. It didn’t take us long for us to become a family, a class, and not just any class, but the graduating class of 2007. And with the family we have made here, we will continue on our journey into the high school and make a new, bigger family.

Each one of us came from our own small family, our own parent’s arms, to begin our academic careers, in kindergarten. Looking back, elementary school taught me lessons I will keep with me forever, and I am very thankful for such a wonderful first step in my journey. But after those 6 years, we all came to the next step in our journeys, Middle School. What we faced in fifth grade is exactly what we are facing now. New school, new step, new beginning.

I am so thankful that I had the opportunity to experience middle school at such a warm, caring environment as HBT. The 3 years I have spent here have been nothing short of amazing. Through the good times and the bad, Thompson has given me not only knowledge, but the ability to move unto the next chapter in my life. As we progress to the high school, we will forever keep all that Thompson has taught us. We are still learning who we are, but our Thompson family will always be a part of us, that much we do know.


Today marks not an ending, but a beginning. Sure our days at Thompson are over, but our days at not only the high school, but the rest of the world are just getting started. The future is ours.





any suggestions? does it portray the theme?

thanks for reading it! love youuuu.


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chronicIronics answered Tuesday May 22 2007, 3:48 pm:
Hm, we go to Thompson too. -shifty eyes-. They already picked the two winners who are presenting. But it sounds good to us, it's the kind of corny, untrue crap theyre looking for.

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DepthofHeart answered Monday May 21 2007, 9:25 pm:
It's really good! Great theme and it does porteay the theme!

I have two suggestions - small ones.

You put:

"Each one of us came from our own small family, our own parent’s arms"

You should leave out the small, because you don't know how big or small everyones family is. So that doesn't apply to eveyone.

And you you should switch parent's with guardian's or just add it.

e.g.: our own parent's or guardian's arms.

::Jasmine::

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xo_underneath answered Monday May 21 2007, 9:12 pm:
i think its really good & that it does portray the theme :)

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xoashhx33 answered Monday May 21 2007, 9:03 pm:
i think this is really good!

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