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Question Posted Saturday November 25 2006, 3:46 pm

id like opinions on this... just what does this say to you, like whats it about? --

head spinning and i go numb
you used to be the only place i could turn
everything that once was, brought down by a lie
inside, a burning feeling like my heart has bled and died

i could feel it every touch, every smile, every kiss
perfect memories now feel like false bliss
its still what i want and i want nothing more
see the light, dry my tears, and pick me off this floor

my breath is frozen in me as my heart turns cold
locked in this feeling forever while the world grows old
if i could see it in your eyes would it make it more clear?
was this for real or just the happening reality of my fears?

how could something so perfect just be ripped from my hands?
you beg me to believe but i question how i can
my perfected dream turned into a chilling nightmare
now watch as my heart breaks open and tears freefall in the air

ive lost sense of direction and i dont know where to go
was she right and is this just false hope?
well now its my turn to beg
i want to live again and i want to fly high
so save me please and dont let this die.

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vomski10 answered Sunday November 26 2006, 3:13 pm:
yeah sounds very broken hearted and wants someone back. it's really good i like it =)

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KaylaLeanNe answered Sunday November 26 2006, 12:54 pm:
Very deep. Sounds like someone is heart broken and wants someone back. I liked it though

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t0xicParadiSe answered Saturday November 25 2006, 7:27 pm:
This sounds as if someone is heartbroken. That the person wants to move on, but they can't. It sounds as if some memories are holding them back. Also to me it says that everything was going great and all of a sudden something bad happened that ended the relationship.

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ductape_n_roses answered Saturday November 25 2006, 5:37 pm:
It sounds deep and meaningful and written out of sorrow and grief.

In my opinion I think you're reflecting on your experience where someon you held dear to your heart was either ripped away from you abruptly or went away by themselves. It seems like that you relied a lot on this person and now that this person is gone away, you're completely lost and you wish that this someone would come back so that he/she could preserve the wonderful feelings that you had when you were with her/him.

Overall I love this poem =] IM me sometime if you want

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emilyy answered Saturday November 25 2006, 5:34 pm:
To me it says a broken heart. Someone who has lost their wife/husband/boyfriend/girlfriend.

They possibly grew apart, cheated or something along those lines.

Very emotional & touching in my opinion.

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looloo12 answered Saturday November 25 2006, 5:18 pm:
i may be wrong but it sound like someone who got cheated on by there husband,wife,ogf, or bf.

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