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writers block
hey im a good writer and all but im havin trouble writing a poem to my friend. I wrote it out in a paragraph saying
"I've been doing some thinking. This may sound a little akward but I'm sorry I know your right. I guess I haven't been using my head so greatly these past few weeks. I'm happy to finally know I actually have someone who will give me helpful advice and a shoulder to cry on. When I need it. I guess we can thank those summer night chats with out those I guess we really wouldn't have all those memories and inside jokes made.
Thanks for being there for me"
I know if I work for hours I can get it but I can't seem to get it out. Can someone write a poem for me? or should I just leave it as it is and explain that in a paragraph form and not make any changes. I'm not sure what to do... thanks for helping if you do.
(P.S. he writes as well)
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Listen im not going to write you a poem.... that would be wrong... you need to write from your heart.... it may take you 2 hours or 2 days but what you need to do is write from the heart.... jsut write all your feelings down dont let anything stop you... the best poems come from your true feelings... trust me i have been writing poems for years... and they are all about love and they are poems i wrote from the heart... the ones i did have to think hard about werent as good as the ones that came from my heart.
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God knew I needed you, so you are here for a beautiful reason
To help us suffer, and love, and help each other as we change like a fresh new season
I know that God didn't give me air to breathe, he gave me you
As I've watched you catch me when I fell, and comfort me more than you do yourself, I know its all true
Memories are locked up inside with me to stay, and will never leave me
Sometimes, you and I are both afraid that we will move on, but then I remembered that moving on doesn't mean moving apart, the only thing that makes sense in life, is you and me
God put you on this earth so you can tell me that theres more to life than bad
and god knows that if you weren't here today with me, my view of the world would be ugly, and every season would be sad.
-TheTeenGirl
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hmm, if i were you i would just think of the memories you and him have had together. like say just doing something simple like going to the mall, write something like, "youre always by my side, and most of the time that you are -we're having alot of fun!" just write you know what comes best. i wouldnt take other poeples poems because it didnt come from you but thats just my opinion. you could also take lyrics from a song and put them on there, like "aint no mmmountain high enouuughhh ainttt no riva widee enouigh, aint no...and so on" or something. just appreciate what a good friend he is and write how much he means to you and stuff.
try here for friendship quotes:
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*good luck!
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After all my thoughts in my head
and all these days, of worring and dread
i realise this whole time you were rite
you were always there to hold me tight
you were there to lift me high
you were there to help me reach the sky
you were there and you have always been true
the only thing i can say now i thank you
you can do write something like this if you want, change it around make it more yous. or leave it that way it is. personally i like the way you have it. please rate! i would really like to know if this poem helped or not
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well... i write poetry and i just did a little thing for you. you must be a great person. :)
You are the greatest friend I could need
Without you around I’d be lost indeed
Thanks for the chats on those warm summer nights
And thanks for never starting massive fights
You’ve been there for me when I’m happy or sad
You keep persisting to make sure I’m fine-even when I get mad
When I need advice your there for me
And I never want to lose you, you see
I know now that I never will find
A friend as good as you are
And I know you are never too far
All those inside jokes keep us together
I know we can handle any kind of weather
You are my best friend and this is true
I want you to know that I love you!
~ANGE
*~respect yourself~*
hey! glad i could help. you ever need anything, just ask!
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Actually not many people know this about me but i write... lyrics and poetry mostly... I think that its pretty good. I would leave it mostly the same maybe put it in paragraph form but spread it out a little bit and personally if you love this person add a big I LOVE YOU! at the end thats just me tho you should do what you want...
--Kuzo
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