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dig or dis poem called empty
Empty would be the word to use to describe me.
I go through life living in a world of my own.
A world that is filled with nothing but darkness.
A world that is full of pain, depression, and sadness.
I always feel like I’m alone.
Like no one wants to be around me.
So I put on an act just so I can feel wanted.
I go around being some one that I’m not.
Just so people will accept me.
But what would be the point of doing so.
If by the time I get home I still feel nothing but emptiness
What would be the point if I can’t be myself?
Am I really that afraid of what people would say about me?
Worried about how they could ever accept me.
Is my life empty because I’m living a lie?
Or is it empty because I want it to be that way.
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Thats good i just hope you really dont feel like that :( i hope you are one of the writers that put themselves in other people's places like i do-trix
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i like it. i can relate to it alot. but it seems really personal. but keep writing about your feelings cuz it helps...:)
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it seems mOre like yOur persOnal life than a pOem...but its a gOod write!! drOp wun in the inbOx if ya need mOre...!!
Sara*Michelle
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LISTEN YOU NEED TO HAVE CONFIDECE LOOK AT ALL THE GOOD STUFF IN YOU ALL THE TALENT YOU HAVE!!
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hi, a very nice poem...very touching...but i think that the gurl should act her self..n not worry to much wut ppl say...who cares wut they say anyways...as long as u kno who u are n ur happy wit it...fuk other ppl ;) xoxo effy
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