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My poem please tell me what u think its called MY LIFE
My life is full of sadness,hatred,and sorrow.
My life is full of lonleyness and pain.
It's full of people who care and love me.
It's full of people who hate and despise me.
They pick on me cause of my
skin,hair,personality,figure,and how i carry my-self.
They don't like me cause im diffrent.
I have no true friends.
I have no one who is there for me.
I don't know what true love feels like.
I don't know how it feels to really care for someone.
I don't know how some one can care for me.
When all i do is bring people hatred,and stress.
I don't know what my purpose of being here really is.
Is it to bring people pain.
Or am i just here to take up space.
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omg it is sooooo sad but yet sooooo good. i luv it soooo much...how do u do it? i would luv to know ur secret...:)
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well i loved the poem n i think its great that express ur feelings by writting down what u feel!instead of keepin it inside like i do most of the time n i have had a lot of sadness,hatred,sorrow,lonleyness n pain in my life
but i think u should keep written
~!~chynna~!~
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ok I like it but it is much like the other one that was just on here like 5 mins ago. unless it is the same one.
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Well, that was quite a poem. Don't get me wrong it's great. I'm glad you can express your self instead of keeping inside like some people I know.
Thanx for letting me read your poem.
~Chelsea~
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to b honest... really honest... im jus one person... dont rate me plz... but i dont like it cuz i think no1 iz on the earth to bring ppl pain... the end i didnt like but ^ 2 I don't know how it feels to really care for someone. 4rm there down i dont like. mayb itz cuz i cant relate to it. well i hope u keep writing u oviously have potential.
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i love it. keep on writing, you have a talent. i wish i did
xo, Kristen
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That is awsome I love it. Keep the good work up!!!
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I love it. It's how I feel most days.
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