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another poem


Question Posted Monday July 19 2004, 3:31 pm

another poem yall

I look in the mirror
But what do I see
The person I look at
Isn’t the real me
No one knows
What I want to see
Someone that loves
Some one that hates
Someone who isn’t just the someone
That everyone thinks is me

another

Who is louder our hearts or our minds
When it comes time to decide what do we find
We listen closely but it is hard to tell
Almost as if they are two little bells
But which one masks the other
It is so hard to hear
Why should we even bother
It will only cause a tear

another

I shiver in the heat of the day
I wish I could just get away
I have these dreams at night
I don’t even try to fight
For this feeling isn’t something I can escape
Now my heart is out of shape
I can’t run of hide
From these thoughts inside
You will stay there forever
Giving up never
You torture me day and night
Because this will never be right

one more

I shiver in the heat of the day
I wish I could just get away
I have these dreams at night
I don’t even try to fight
For this feeling isn’t something I can escape
Now my heart is out of shape
I can’t run of hide
From these thoughts inside
You will stay there forever
Giving up never
You torture me day and night
Because this will never be right


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BlueEyedBlondie725 answered Tuesday July 20 2004, 2:24 am:
WOW! I really liked them!! And I'm sure many other people do too. Sometimes I feel like I could just get away. I can relate to some of the stuff in the poems. You did a really great job on them. Keep up the good work and keep posting them!!

xoxo Kourtney

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bAhAmAmA0250 answered Tuesday July 20 2004, 12:50 am:
I like all them I got drifted on the 3rd one towards the ending but i got back on track. But the 4th one is the same as the 3rd one just to let you know-trix

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azn_ch1ck798 answered Monday July 19 2004, 8:30 pm:
omg! that is sooooo good!! wow there are just some pplz that have sooo much talent and your one of them!!!!!

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cookiegurl5577 answered Monday July 19 2004, 5:31 pm:
that was good you definately have talent!
~jessica~

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superstar10 answered Monday July 19 2004, 4:18 pm:
they are really good. i really like the last one. keep up the good work.

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Roxybabii922 answered Monday July 19 2004, 3:45 pm:
You write really cute poems :-)

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