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I am writing a novel about a sixteen year old girl who is forced to go to a summercamp. While she is there she meets a 25 year old man who lives up in the forest and falls in love with him. Then he gets creepy and kidnaps her to his cabin that's up in the forest where he is holding two other girls because he says that he is "in love with them and wants no one to get in the way of their love" and they have to escape and get back.

Basically the whole theme is rebellion and its effects.

would you be interested in reading this? what other things or twists could i add to make it more interesting?

i would be really happy reading this book! haha as for a huge twist, i would throw him in with a split personality, sort of like "hide and seek"...that would be great...good luck with the novel!!!
-hayley

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(Rating: 5) haha thanks and i was thinking of doing something like that. the book is going to be very lifetime original movie-ish with weird psychos and creepy twists =]

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