can people give examples of hooks in their essays? any essay? preferably not a statistic? i dont really know to to make an attention-grabbing statement.
Just start out with a question..Get them thinking!Like "Have you ever..."
You'll do fine!
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I have never been made fun of in my entire life. I am pretty popular, and am I what I would consider very nice. Well, recently, this girl, Alyise, decided it would be funny if she sort of made fun of me. I am shocked and rather pissed, since this is the 1st time I have gotten like jabbed at. It's not like I want to be friends with her, but I would really like her to stop. I don't want to look bitchy, or super sensitive, which I am, but don't really show it all the time. I don't know why she would do this, since I have never really talked to her or anything. What should I do?
This sounds like pure jealousy,envy.You say you wouldn't really like to be friends with her...well maybe that's what is going to get her to cool her jets!:)Just try talking to her..Maybe she thinks you're a snob,or has the wrong impression of you.
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My boyfriend and I are moving in together soon. Any tips on how to make it work well? Thanks!
Discuss the bills,and who pays what evenly.Everything will fall into place!When you move in with someone you learn A LOT about them..Conflicts will emerge possibly,or possibly not.I wish you the best.
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hey, im 13yrs old female rite. and i have stretch marks on my thighs and on my like under my knee. my mom saw it and she was kinda freakin me out but she said only women who have children and old women are supposed to get that yes, im a lil overweight.. is it bad..? she says its not healthy im not scared or anything but maybe if i lose weight itl go away?
thank uu=]]
oh and by the way ... my strech marks are red.. not white..
so yeah??
thank u
Stretch marks are normal!Not only can pregnant women and elderly people get them,but youngens can too!Don't worry.Just work out,and put Coco Butter Lotion on them EVERYDAY.That is the best lotion to buy and it helps stretch marks fade from anywhere!
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What are some Halloween costumes, I could make at home?
Last year, I was a biker, and I wore like leather pants and stuff.
Just homemade outfits, like flappers, etc.
Be creative!If you have old clothes lying around,put some food coloring on them,and vuala!Blood!Or hey you could even be a hobo with ripped old dirty clothes LOL I don't know.Just let creativity take over!
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hi, i know this might be a little too much information but i AM pretty nervous for some strange reason. First off i NEVER had sex in my life, i have done other things but sex isn't one of them. anyway. i am really nervous because my period the past 3 months has either been on the 7th or 8th day of the month but its now the 14th almost the 15th and i still haven't got it is that normal for a 15 year old girl?
now although i havent had sex im still REALLY nervous like if there is something wrong with me.
please help asap. thank you =]
Irregular periods are totally normal for your age!Actually,for any age.Don't stress!There's not a thing wrong with you..If you are truly concerned,contact your Doc and let him/her know what's up:)You're healthy,trust me.
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i have school tomorrow and i need to wash my bookbag. is it okay to put in in the washing machine. if not how do i hand wash it?
If you zip it up completely,you can wash it in the machine.Some machines have a hand wash setting..if you want to hand wash it manually,just fill your bathtub up with water and get a rag and start scrubbing it.Then let it air dry..
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Does everyone have some people that hate them?I was just wondering.
No matter where you are,how you dress,how you talk,or what you look like,there will always be someone that'll "hate" you or dislike you.Whether it's for no reason,or for a lame reason..It doesn't mean you should change.Stay true to yourself.
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My cat is about 7 years old and has developed a really bad sore on his back. It does not look like it was caused by a cat fight(I have three other cats.) It almost looks like a hole and like it is decaying. It is a greyish color underneath. It smells horrible as well. I noticed it today and I started packing it with triple antibiotic ointment. I can not afford to go to a vet right now(I have no money.) If anyone can help me please let me know. I can send you a picture of the sore if you want. I am very worried and if anyone has an idea of what this may be and how to treat it inexpensivly please let me know!! Thanks to anyone that reads this and attempts to help me.I live in phoenixville , pa and I don't know of any free clinics in the area
I suggest that you call a local vet and just ASK what you can do inexpensively..Ask to speak to the vet directly.That's what I had to do when my cat came home with a chunk of his tail missing..Stress to them that you don't have money to pay for a visit,or treatment.I wish you luck.
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14/f
going out with my boyfriend for a year now.. hes birthdays coming up in a month. he has like an aquarium full of fish.
i'm thinking somehow i could get him/make him a gift related to his love of fish? [[he doesn't eat them]]
But i'm pretty sure he doesn't need another fishie pet lol. Any ideas or opinons on what to buy him?
thankss for reading :)
I'd suggest to buy something nice to add to the aquarium.Like a little castle figure,or something you've heard him mention he wants for it.I'd suggest some cute little fishies,BUT I am not aware of what type he has in there now.So,if you buy him some,the others might eat them and that'd be tragic.Be cute with the gift!:)
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15/m
i live far away from my gf and see her only every other weekend. a month ago i could make her come all the time but now she cant come. we both have depression and get depressed when we don't see each other so maybe that might have something to do with it. Also, this weekend i was fingering her a lot deeper than normal and i was wondering if that would make her too loose for sex.
If anything,fingering her deeper is making her just loose enough for sex..A girl can never be too loose for sex.However,she can be too tight for sex.So,you're doing no wrong!Depression plays a big part in any kind of sex.So,when you're together,make the best of it,really get into it!Live in the moment..
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i have a husky that has a inffection around his eyes. His eyes are very swollen and red. can anybody help me with this because i dont know what to do.?
I've been there with my dog..Go to your local pet feed,or a vet and ask for TERRAMYCIN.It comes in a small tube..You just apply it around the eye area 4-5 times a day and it'll clear up within the first week.The stuff really works!And you don't need much,it lasts really long.
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My Kitten seems to like wet food better than dry food. My question is how can you get a cat to eat dry food. Because right now with our budget, we cant afford wet food. x.x Any advice?
Put water on the dry food,and it'll become moist and soft enough for kitty to eat.
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(13/f)
I just took a bath, and I noticed that I had a couple pimples mixed in with my pubic hair..
I know that pimples are just hair folicles that grease and crap get stuffed into, so I might just be over-reacting. It's also been itching down there a lot more than usual, if that makes a difference.
I just got off my period, and I just started school last week, and we've been doing loads of stuff in gym that makes me really sweaty.
Does anyone know if I might have an infection or something, or knows that I'm just over-reacting?
Any advice is very appreciated! =9
When you take a bath,your letting your "lower half" sit in oils from your body,and soap.Soap is NOT good for your "lower half" to be submurged in.It can cause itching and infection..I'd suggest showers instead,and if that doesn't work,buy a cream.I recommend Vagisil..Good luck!
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Does anyone know where I can get a job at 15? Like at an actually store. Thanks!
It's hard to get a job at 15,because most employers are looking for you to have your own transportation,and a flexible sched.But if you or your parents know a manager somehwere,you're in!Good luck.
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I have 2 questions here, but they relate both to the same problem so I'll ask in one.
I have really oily hair for some reason. Like I wash it one day, then it's okay for the next day but the day after it looks like it hasn't been washed in weeks. So I basically have to wash my hair everyday otherwise it gets REALLY oily. I've been told that's bad for your hair too. That's not my question.
My question is, how can I stop it from going oily so quickly? I've tried heaps of stuff. Different shampoos and conditioners, washing it twice, scrubbing extra hard, not scubbing at all etc nothing works!
My second question is: Straight after I wash my hair, the damp bits become oily straight away. And everytime I wash my hair it's different damp bits, and different oily bits. Like above I've tried everything. I think it's something to do with the way my hair dries. It's only the damp bits which are oily. I can't dry or straighten my hair without those damp bits becoming huge oily parts and it's starting to become REAL annoying and a HUGE problem. What do I do?
The oils your hair carries are healthy for your hair.People with dry hair,have to go without washing their hair just to get those oils..But I know it can be annoying.Start using only shampoo for awhile and use conditoner maybe once or twice a week.Maybe try blowdrying your hair after your shower..Good luck!
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So i'm in fairly good body condition,i would consider myself a normal size and weight for my age and height. But latley ive been noticing these "Sattle bags" i think there called, and they look so weird underneath shirts, so i was wondering the fastest way to get rid of them/ make them less noticeable. I've been eating healthier and getting more exsersize, but i was wondering if anyone on here has gotten rid of them, wat it took, and how long it took them.
thanks so so much.
They're very easy to get rid of.It took me about a month..Do sit ups,side crunches,and even jog.I'd suggest to do more sit ups before you begin jogging,because jogging will make your abs very sore.If you want to cover your "sattle bags" until they're gone,just layers your clothing,or wear baggy shirts.They'll be gone in no time!:)
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