ShelbyB answered Thursday February 17 2011, 9:25 am: You have to go into deeper thought. Use more words to describe it. Make the reader feel like theyre there or they can feel what the charector was feeling. Like instead of saying the flowers were yellow. you say: The beautiful rows of golden colored, misted flowers that flowed in the warm summer breeze. Lmao, something along those lines. You could use a Synonym finder to find better choice of words. The more you can feel the writing the better. If you know what im saying. :p [ ShelbyB's advice column | Ask ShelbyB A Question ]
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