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Opinions II
your silent song resonates
chords strike me like an idea
i don't understand and never will
i always want you here
your eyes are always bright and wide
is it dawn or dusk?
this tinted, blue october sky
dissonance sounds just..
perfect
keep it simple?
no one taught me how
you and me sounds tricky, too
this is how a bleeding, beating heart sounds
i love you, i need you
i've got a twisted toothpick spine
it's an arch you say you adore
i'm proud to call you mine
if you'll always call me your's
spare me a plastic ring, maybe tin
because the concept feels alright
let the bad times roll in
i'll smile with scars from every fucked fight
it's nothing like what they tested and taught
it's nothing ideal
but you stole every second thought,
tell me how this feels
What comes to mind at all when you read this?
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Wow, I really love that. It had such a flow to it. I write alot, poems and stories and such, and that is REALLY good.
To me, it means that like, with every relationship, there will be problems and ups and downs, but you can work through it because you spill you heart put for eachother and love one another endlessly. and since your love for eachother endlessly, you don't need a ring to prove it [like marraige] you just need a promise or an understanding.
I think it sounds better without music being added to it, but you could always try ? I like it alot :] especially the part where i says..
"keep it simple?
no one taught me how
you and me sounds tricky, too
this is how a bleeding, beating heart sounds
i love you, i need you
i've got a twisted toothpick spine
it's an arch you say you adore
i'm proud to call you mine
if you'll always call me your's"
... it reminds me of my relationship with my boyfriend :] haha.
good luck and have fun ! hope i helped, xxo.
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im thinking about relationships.
getting a new one and then looking back on the old horrible ones.
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