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Thesis Statement
WHat would be a good thesis statement for this prompt:
Evaluate the relative importance of the following as factors prompting Americans to rebel in 1776:
-parliamentary taxation
-restriction of civil liberties
-British military measures
-the legacy of colonial, religious and
political ideas
and some examples of each bullet would be amazing... im dying here haha
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Although there are four major factors that led to the American revolution, including parliamentary taxation, restriction of civil liberties, British military measures, and the legacy of colonial, religious, and political ideas, they do not all contribute equally.
I hope this helps for an overall thesis for a paper
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Well, first of all, the point of a thesis statement is to introduce what you wish to talk about in a paper; therefore, examples aren't relevant at this point. Use examples in your supporting paragraphs. The first paragraph as a whole should be kind of brief as well.
I don't want to write it for you, but if I were you, I would simply use this format: "______, _____, and _______ are relevant factors of the American's rebellion against the British in 1776."
Make sure you transition well, too. "Therefore" may be a good word to start this sentence off with.
If you need more help, just let me know!
-Manders
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