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essay intro
Brutus is the perfect example of Aristotle’s tragic hero. He holds high rank in society as Caesar’s best friend. Not only is he known for his social position, but also as the most honorable man in Rome. However, his honor also becomes his tragic flaw. It clouds his judgement and eventually leads to his downfall.
how can i close that intro or make it better?
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I'd say you could make it better had you done Oedipus Rex.
Aristotle took Oedipus Rex, and made the foundation for all other tragic heros.
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ok here goes...i hope you can follow me:P
...Not only is BRUTUS known for his social position.....
......Brutus' honor clouds his judgement.....
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End with your thesis statement. I don't know what the essay is on, so I couldn't help you with that.
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I'm pretty sure that it was sophocles that wrote the greek tragedies---and that shakespeare wrote the play.
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Well, for me to give you a GOOD answer, you'd have to tell me what your essay topic is!!
You never really need to 'close' an introduction. The best thing is to lead from the intro into the essay - so make the last point of your intro the first point of your essay. E.G. '...they have a good reputation because their chocolate is really tasty.
It is this tasty chocolate that has lead to their monopoly on the market. A monopoly is when...' etc etc etc.
I think your intro sounds very good as it is...just remember to relate it DIRECTLY to your topic/question - send it to my inbox for me to give you more help on this - and try and aim it at someone who has never read the play or studied the topic you are writing this essay on. For example, add 'Brutus of the Shakespeare play Julius Caesar' etc etc.
If you need more help, on this or any other part of your essay, just give me a yell...I did study Julius Caesar but it was about three years ago now so I might not be all that great :P
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