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is this poem good?
I had to write a poem for class, it could be on any subject written in any form. I wrote this about my grandpas death. please tell me if its good.
I’m sorry
For not being there when you died
For leaving you alone
For not saying I love you when I left
For all the suffering you went through
For not suffering with you
For enjoying myself while you were in pain
For laughing while you could barely speak
For smiling while you were crying
For being careless while you were afraid
For not being there
I’m so sorry
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I like it... It comes from the heart and that is what makes it great. Teachers should not criticize what comes from the heart. You would get an A from me.
Eva J
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that peom is amazing.you may have a future in writing poems.you should defintaly turn that in. youll be sure to get an A+.
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Yeah thats a great poem. I fthe teacher tells you otherwise she can burn in hell! rate a five to be nice
---montrealfan
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YEA! That is good!
:)
I suck at poetry :(
Hope I Helped!
RATE&LEAVECOMMENTS
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Peace.
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i think its pretty good, but if you want another one heres on I wrote
Goodbye
For every person that doesn’t care,
Another one dies.
So be careful how you say,
Your “Hello” and “Goodbye”.
It's short and simple but its deep.
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