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can anyone give me advice/critisism on this poem that i have to hand in for school? what do you think of it?
she walks along the beach
with her hair blowing in the soft, cool wind
searching for seashells along the endless path
as she glides her toes in the hot sand
looking out at the ocean, her eyes catch a wave
it crashes against the water with the reasurrance of another
glaring out at the ocean, her life seems so simple
yet the dark ocean is filled with depth and wonders
questions that will never be answered, and a promised
continuance of the peaceful mind that the beach
will always bring her
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this poem can have many meanings to different people but I can't critisize cause it was really good!
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dude I am but I realy didn't like I am sorry
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That's a really good poem! I like it. =)
♥ lAuRa
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