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MY GREATEST ENEMY
My closest friend has become my greatest enemy.
She betrayed me by lying to my face.
By trying to get me to believe a lie.
By trying to get into the middle of my relationship and then lying about it.
Instead of her listening and trying to help me with my problems.
All she did in return was use everything to get revenge on me.
For some thing that wasn’t even true.
She has become my greatest enemy.
She will no longer be there for me.
She will no longer be able to talk to me.
She will no longer be a friend to me.
She has become my greatest enemy.
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Great job! For me it's the other way around. My greatest enemy has become my closest friend. Thanx for sharing it! Latas!
.::Chelsea::.
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well..ask your enemy why she doesnt want to be your friend and what did u do wrong to her.and if she still is being a brat about it then find a better friend than her/him to hang out with...u gotta have at LEAST another friend than her but if u dont just start hanging out with a different crowd!!-rachey ps hope i helped your troublesome life
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I like it-trix
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sounds a lot more like a complaint than a poem. Try using different poetic devices to give it that poetic feeling.
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thats a really good poem. but i am sorry to hear that, that has happend. anyways keep up the good work, does writing poems help express yourslef? please write me back!?! thanx
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I'm sorry to hear that, find a new one. Listen girlfriend, obviously she wont take the time to sit down and talk straight dope with you, so move on. Dont be all morbid and gothic because of this one chick. You feelin me?
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