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uh, i just wrote this poem and i wanna see if u think its good.i dont kno wut to name it tho. so here it is:
There's love i miss
A desired kiss
A someone to hold
Their loveletters to unfold
Love i wish to have
But this i can't
To risk my heart i shan't
To take that risk
Is to risk the miss
Of losing something that once was
All because
We fools who love
Will risk beyond and above
To have that chance
To take that fall
All because of love's true call
by:me,taryn collins!
wut do you think?i hope you like it.
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I think it's a really good poem! You obviously have the talent to write brilliant but true poems! This poem can relate to anyone who has questions about true love!
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I think its a really good poem. You guys did really great on it and a lot of people can relate to it! So good job. Keep writting them and posting them because I really liked them! Keep up the good work!
xoxo Kourtney
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i like it alot!!! you have a talent.. i wish i could do that
xox Kristen
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i like it alot you have a talent ..... keep with it :) <3 Rachael
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I LOVE IT!!! lol i think anybody who takes time to write something like that deserves a good name for it. but thats a tough one i dont know what you should call it..maybe something along the lines of..."loves true call" because of that last line really wraps things up. but thats just my decision why dont you get more suggestions from some other advice columnists or friends?
*hannah
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that poem was great you should be a poet of some kind i write poems to..keep writing..
later samantha
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That's really cute :-)
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Tha poem is awesum girl! keep up tha good work!!
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awww i like it!! the only part that is kinda..ehh for me is the "i shan't" part because i dont think that thats a word or ne thing but i love it!! on a scale frum 1-10 i would give it a 9.5!*hope i helped* <3/Dakota
[RaTe Me PlEaSe AnD iF yOu NeEd Ne ThInG eLsE jUsT dROp oNe In My InBoX]
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i like it is really good. but shant't? idk....keep up the good work....:)
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wow! thats one amazzzzzing poem! i cant even think of that, it probably comes deep from inside! i feel the same way!<3
please rate me=)
<3 JeN
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