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this is for c talon since he/she wants a better type of peotry instead of the "self pity"
My Friend
Life is full of ups and downs
smile laughter tears and frowns
but with all life's changes
its good to know
i have a friends to whon i can go
and no matter how hurt that
i have been
you always remind me i have a friend
my life has been blessed becaus eof you
your loving ways
and allt hat you do.
Happy this isnt a self pity poem!!!!
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thats pretty good! -trix
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He. And it's not that I HATE self-pity poems, I just hate people who churn out them like a machine. I'm tired of teens only being viewed as able to write depressing stuff, no? Both were good, this one's better.
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your very talented...and dont listen to c talon...poems come from the heart and if you are depressed, that's what comes out. don't worry hun...you are obviously a very good poet :) hope to see more of your poetry! :)
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