Is this poem OK?
people always tell me i'm not like others,
i don't fit in with the preps and am not like the brothers,
I like to listen to Aerosmith and P.O.D,
Is there any other way i should be?
I don't have a certain way to dress,
For someone i hardly know to impress,
I don't watch movies about cheerleaders,
And i hardly go to the movie theatres,
I just am myself and no one can change my rep,
Except maybe good old johnny depp
That last verse was a joke
Pleez rate the poem 1-10. Thank you
Lizzy
i give ur poem a 10. it's very in-depth and you bring ur emotions to life. you have seriousness with a hint of humor. it's very well organized. good job
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(Rating: 5)
thnx
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