I've written a well thought out essay on why I want to be cheer captain. But I'm stuck on the conclusion! I've put in my essay my good communication skills, responsibility and maturity, how I'm a good role model, fairness and impartiality, how I'm approachable, and how I can delegate with being bossy. Please help! I want to be captain so bad.
[ Answer this question ] Want to answer more questions in the Health & Fitness category? Maybe give some free advice about: Sports? JustJessOx answered Tuesday June 19 2012, 4:27 pm: Hey there,
Okay Just keep it simple. A conclusion is just a general look back and quick summary of the essay. It shouldn't be too long or drawn out.
Just start by saying "In conclusion to this essay,I feel I have effectively and clearly outlined the reasons as to why I should be appointed cheer captain. (reiterate some points in concise form) I sincerely hope my application is considered as this would mean a great deal to me."
Something like that!
Good luck and I hope you get it :)
Much <3
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orphans answered Tuesday June 19 2012, 9:48 am: Well, a conclusion is just a summary of what you have written. It's for when, for example, you write a 10 page essay, and need a quick summary of your findings.
In the conclusion, just re-state why you think you would be great for it, and why you want in, but in shortened form.
Conclusion to this answer: Just state everything simply, and in short.
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