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What do you think of my novel summary and titles?
Here's the summary:
Ashton, Bree, Chaston, and Dalia were best friends until Dalia disappeared and was killed four months later. Off they go back to the school where she was murdered, and where they're friendship started. But there is still a killer on the loose, still people that want to join the exclusive dorm they're part off, Eva still trying to become friends with them, and the girls are still breaking (maybe killing) hearts.
So how should I start? I mean I already have some ideas but I would like your opinions.
1) Start at Dalia's funeral
2) Start at the part where Dalia and her old boyfriend Kaleb are having a fight on whether or not he loves her. Then she tells him she's a vampire (she really is).
3) Start where they are reflecting on Dalia's murder and talking about secrets.
I know this sounds like Pretty Little Liars. . .it won't be like that. Promise. :)
BQ: Which title is better?
A,B,C, E
Alpha-Dead Soup
Everything is Wrong
Mints
Ace and Hearts
Ace
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You should stage it as Number one for the first part,.
Second part should be 3
Then Third part should be Her boyfriend thinkings back to the arguement they had. but some how he fazed the whole vampire thing orrrr something so he didn't really remember?
I like Everything is wrong :)
Hope this helps
*Jasmine;;
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I think the second beginning would be the most intriguing to audiences. For some reason people like vampire novels. For the title it's hard to decide since we don't know much about the book. They all seem pretty interesting but you should pick which goes along with the book better and will stand out to the reader.
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