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Story book ending


Question Posted Sunday April 27 2008, 8:46 pm

So I'm doing a project for school.. and we have to write a children's book.
My story is about 2 kids who go to a safari/zoo and they see all these cool animals that are different colors (ex. purple elephants). My only problem is .. I don't know how to end it. There wasn't a problem that needed to be resolved or anything. so anyone got any ideas for my story?


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Sima answered Monday April 28 2008, 6:04 pm:
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The kids take the animals from the zoo and ride them all the way back home.

Wow, I wish that my homework was that easy. I'm studying for finals.

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TheAnnie answered Monday April 28 2008, 12:08 am:
yes, this is my thing!

i have a couple of ideas
1)since they see all the funny colored animals, on the last page they could see a normal colored animal and say "what a funny color that is!"
2) it could turn out that they were wearing colored glasses
3)same as two but their binoculars could have had colored lenses
4)end it by them saying "that was fun!who knew animals had such fun colors!" then the second caracter could say "i wish i could be that colorful!"
5)end it by the characters leaving the zoo by saying :uh oh, we're lost!"

i can't think of any more at this second, but if you do need more then don't be afraid to ask! :)I hope i at least sparked some ideas. :)

sounds like a cute story by the way.

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sally91 answered Sunday April 27 2008, 11:56 pm:
there could be a reason why the animals are funny colours and thats what the kids find out at the end, maybe because they have there pajamas on lol you know when horses have there pajamas on, just make it something silly and fun that little kids will like and it will be good. lol hope i helped xx

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