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are these good?
im ganna say quotes i made. can you tell me if there good. ill list then so when you tell me what you think about each one you can just go like 1. good but too corny. 2. i didnt like it. etc...
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1. nothing more, nothing less, nothing inbetween.
2. love is all you need.
3. never give up because if you do you will never suceed.
4. do what you can do, thats all.
5. you make shake shake and get butterfly when you around, so stay away! dont come near!
6. love is for the weak minded.
7. love is love hate is hate but friends are best friends!
9. dont steal my spotlight, because then there is no spot light!!
10. life is amazing. life is swell. life is better then the computer from dell.
thanks guys! i wanna enter these in a quote competion at school. and i just want some feedback on them.! THANKS A BUNCH!<3
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Maybe give some free advice about: Random Weirdos?
Not all of them make sense, have already been done, or aren't "snappy" enough. Quotes should have a good meaning behind them, not just a couple of random words thrown together.
Just take your time. It can take days to come up with the perfect one. One good one is better than 100s of not very good ones. ;)
1 is ok.
2 is a line from a song.
3 has been done 100s of times, it can work if you shorten it down, rearrange the words.
4 Change it to something about trying your best, not doing something you can do. Just to make it a bit more clearer. If you make it a little better, this one can turn out being quite good.
5 really doesn't make sense to me.
6 doesn't either. Why is love for the weak minded?
7 is okay but again, needs work for it to make sense - although I can see what you're trying to achieve and the message you're trying to get across.
9 Doesn't make much sense to me, again. Change it to something like, dont steal my spotlight - it's a one man show.. etc etc along those lines.
10 is okay if you're a fan of Dell computers, lol
Did you miss out a number 8 by the way?
Anyway, I suggest searching quotes if you haven't already. You'll find thousands here:
Just to give you an idea.
Do you have any phrases you live by? Personal experience will help you alot and give you a starting point.
Remember, take your time. Don't put yourself under so much pressure to come up with some amazing quote, because if you do.. then you probably won't come up with one :)
Very best of luck in the competition by the way.
Edit:
Of course I don't mind. and thanks alot for your feedback!
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umm honestly you gatta work on those.
like all of them.
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