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Writing Project.


Question Posted Monday August 20 2007, 11:31 am

OKay, over the summer you had to write a fiction story and make it believeable. Well through the summer I had a lot of Family reunions, driving place to place just random things and got really into it. Well this is going to be very confusing because I dont wanna give all the details.. im gay like that and well okay this girl has special powers, and ends up falling in love with her Gardian.. which isn't good. Well this whole new world is strange to her, and she ends up running into the wrong kind of people so her Gardian(David) saves her cuz hes awsome like that and ends up revelling to her that the Aunt&Uncle she thinks she's lived with her whole life were only in her life for a year. She had her memories erased and put fake ones in.. just random things that would make her believe shes lived with them her whole life. Well my book starts out when she doesnt remember David, shes paniking and ends up using her powers yayyy well the first book ends when shes joining like the bad people basicly ( The ones she ran into) because Elder(Davids Grandfather) and his counsel strip David of his like Gardian powers ands shes wickedd pissed and just joins Dogest. And in the second book you find out why they did it and where Elder and his counsel are. Well i was thinking maybe I should write like a first book where it shows her and David falling in love, and her memories being erased, and why and her going to live with her Aunt and Uncle. Than a book about her life there. But then like what order should it go in. Should it be memorie lost or should it be actually the first book I wrote than have that explain how and why her memorie was earsed..
Im not sure and Im not saposed to discuss it with people who are going to be in my class so anyhelp would be greatfully appreciated


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KellyHappy answered Monday August 20 2007, 2:15 pm:
i think you should put the fact that her memory was erased in teh beggining, but not explain why, or how.
then throughout the book give away little reasons and clues and stuff.

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