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please correct my goodbye letter to my friend whos moving?


Question Posted Sunday June 10 2007, 11:51 am

This is my goodbye letter to my friend but im not good at english so can someone correct it for me please? and make it sad if you could and thank you so much =]and what do you think about this letter?



Damn I cant believe you’re moving….
I was hella shocked when you told me that around February or March
I seriously gonna miss you like a fat kid on a diet misses cake haha cheesy and also im gonna miss your perkiness and your sense of humor. I’m really really sorry when I tried to avoid you these days, like when I tried to keep distance myself from you, I was just upset that your leaving and I didn’t really wanna get close/attached or talk to you because of it (obviously you noticed it and you were right) but I kept denying that I was trying to drift away from you. But now, I seriously regret what I did and I thought it was stupid for me to do that because what I did was just wasted time and making myself more sad and yeah. Anyways, I just wanna appreciate for everything, you are one of the greatest person I ever met seriously and I remember how we met in 8th grade it was at lunch jessica said hi to me and you were like “Hi ericka I like you name” lol and guess what that’s when I first saw number 1(the guy i like) and I thought he was cute so I had a eye on him but I stopped and you know why wink wink* but damn I learned a lot of stuff from our deep talks hella expert on things like poetry, poems keep it up “love counselor” haha seriously though and “lucky charm”(number 1) I also enjoyed talking to you about guys sexiness and secrets and your interesting stories. Thanks for helping me whenever I had a problem you give out a good advice but I regret it when I don’t listen to your advice because it comes up true and all, and I just wanna say that thanks for being great friend, I hope you will find your happiness at Philippines and don’t forget that I’m here for you ALWAYS even though Im not good at advices and all that but I will try my best to help you out anytime also don’t forget to keep your head up and be strong I hope ill see you someday.

P.s I wish I could put knife in your luggage so you cant go to the Philippines haha



Sorry this letter is too long but Thank you so much =)



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rainbowcherrie answered Sunday June 10 2007, 3:22 pm:
Damn, I cant believe you’re moving…
When you told me around February or March, I was hella shocked.

I'm seriously gonna miss you like a fat kid on a diet misses cake, haha, cheesy I know. I'm gonna miss your perkiness and your sense of humor.

I’m really, really sorry about avoiding you these days, when I tried to distance myself from you, I was just upset about you leaving and I didn’t really wanna get close/attached or talk to you because of it (obviously you noticed it and you were right) but I kept denying that I was trying to drift away from you. But now, I seriously regret what I did and I think it was stupid for me to do that because what I did only wasted time and made myself even more unhappy about the situation.

Anyways, I appreciate the time we've spent together and want you to know that you are seriously one of the greatest person I've ever met. I remember how the first time we spoke in 8th grade - it was at lunch, Jessica said hi to me and you said
“Hi ericka I like you name” and guess what? That’s when I first saw number 1(the guy i like) and I thought he was cute and I had my eye on him but I stopped and you know why, wink wink*.

Damn, I learned a lot of stuff from our deep talks. You're a hella expert on things like poetry - and keep it up 'love councillor', haha. Seriously though and 'lucky charm'(number 1). I also enjoyed talking to you about guy's sexiness, secrets and your interesting stories. Thank you for helping me whenever I had a problem, you give out good advice but I regret it when I don’t listen to all of it because it turns out to be true and all.

I just want to say thank you for being a great friend, I hope you will find your happiness in the Philippines - don’t forget that I’m here for you ALWAYS, I'm not good at advice and all that but I will try my best to help you out anytime. Don’t forget to keep your head up, be strong and someday I hope we meet again.

P.S I wish I could put knife in your luggage so you can't go to the Philippines!

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xoxwannabemexox answered Sunday June 10 2007, 3:18 pm:
Damn I cant believe you’re moving….
I was too shocked when you told me around February or March
I’m seriously gonna miss you like a fat kid on a diet misses cake haha. Cheesy and also I’m gonna miss your perkiness and your sense of humor. I’m really really sorry about when I’ve tried to avoid you these days, like when I tried to keep distance from you, I was just upset that your leaving and I didn’t really wanna get closer/more attached to you or talk to you because of it (Obviously you noticed it and you were right.) but I kept denying that I was trying to drift away from you. But now, I seriously regret what I did and I thought it was stupid for me to do that because what I did was just wasting time and making myself sadder and yeah. Anyway, I just wanna appreciate you for everything, you are one of the greatest friends I ever met, seriously and I remember how we met in 8th grade it was at lunch, Jessica said hi to me and you were like “Hi Ericka I like you name” lol and guess what that’s when I first saw number 1(the guy I like) and I thought he was cute so I had a eye on him but I stopped and you know why wink wink* but damn I learned a lot of stuff from our deep talks hella expert on things like poetry, poems keep it up “love counselor” haha seriously though and “lucky charm”(number 1) I also enjoyed talking to you about guys, sexiness, and secrets and your interesting stories. Thanks for helping me whenever I had a problem you give out good advice but I regret it when I don’t listen to your advice because it comes up true every time, and I just wanna say that thanks for being great friend, I hope you will find your happiness at Philippines and don’t forget that I’m here for you ALWAYS even though I’m not good at giving advice and all that but I will try my best to help you out anytime also don’t forget to keep your head up and be strong I hope ill see you someday.

P.S. I wish I could put knife in your luggage so you cant go to the Philippines haha



Sorry this letter is too long but Thank you so much =)

Love, your name


There I corrected it, and no it didn't really need correcting your friend won't mind. It's ore personalized when you put abbreviations and casual talk in to it but now I sound like a freaking teacher haha.Anyway it's a great letter and very heart felt :) hope I helped

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hotpotato answered Sunday June 10 2007, 3:14 pm:
Here is an edited version of your letter. Read it over. I may have altered the meaning of it, but hopefully not. Your letter was heartfelt and sad.. I think I almost cried. :( Best of luck to you and your friend!

Dear _________,

Damn. I can't believe you’re moving..
I was majorly shocked when you told me that around February/March. I am seriously going to miss you like a fat kid on a diet misses cake. Haha, cheesy. Also, I'm going miss your perkiness and your sense of humor. I’m really, really sorry when I tried to avoid you these days. When I tried to keep distance between you and me, I was just upset that you were leaving, and I didn’t really want to get close/attached or talk to you because of it, (obviously you noticed it and you were right) but I kept denying that I was trying to drift away from you. But now, I seriously regret doing what I did and I thought it was stupid for me to do that because all I did was waste time making myself more sad instead of spending time with you on your last days here. Anyway, I just want to thank you. I appreciate you for everything. You are one of the greatest persons I have ever met, and I remember how we met in eighth grade. It was during lunch when Jessica said hi to me and you said, “Hi, Ericka, I like you name.” And guess what? That was when I first saw Number One (the guy i like) and I thought he was cute so I had a eye on him but I stopped and you know why. ;) I learned whole lot from our deep talks, we are so experts in things like poetry, and poems. Keep it up “Love Counselor” and “Lucky Charm”(Number One)! Haha. I also enjoyed talking to you about guys' sexiness and secrets and I enjoyed listening to your interesting stories. Thank you for helping me whenever I had a problem. You give out good advice but I regret it when I don’t listen to your advice because it comes out to be true, and I just want to say that you were a great friend, and I hope you will find your happiness in the Philippines. Don’t forget that I’m here for you ALWAYS even though I'm not good at giving out advice, but I will try my best to help you out anytime. Also, don’t forget to keep your head up and be strong. I hope I'll see you again someday.

Love,
Ericka

P.S. I wish I could put a knife in your luggage so you can't go to the Philippines! Haha.

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