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please can someone correct my letter to a friend whos moving
this is my goodbye letter to my friend but im not good at english so so can someone correct it for me please? and make it sad if you could and thank you so much =]
"Damn I cant believe you’re moving….
I was hella shocked when you told me that around February or March
I seriously gonna miss you like a fat kid on a diet misses cake haha cheesy and also im gonna miss your perkiness and your sense of humor. I’m really really sorry when I tried to avoid you these days, like when I tried to keep distance myself from you, I was just upset that your leaving and I didn’t really wanna get close/attached or talk to you because of it (obviously you noticed it and you were right) but I kept denying that I was trying to drift away from you. But now, I seriously regret what I did and I thought it was stupid for me to do that because what I did was just wasted time and making myself more sad and yeah. Anyways, I just wanna appreciate for everything, you are one of the greatest person I ever met seriously and I remember how we met in 8th grade it was at lunch Mehreen said hi to me and you were like “Hi Princess I like you name” lol and guess what that’s when I first saw number 1 and I thought he was cute so I had a eye on him but I stopped and you know why wink wink* but damn I learned a lot of stuff from our deep talks hella expert on things like poetry, poems keep it up “love counselor” haha seriously though and “lucky charm”(number 1) I also enjoyed talking to you about guys sexiness and secrets and your interesting stories. Thanks for helping me whenever I had a problem you give out a good advice but I regret it when I don’t listen to your advice because it comes up true and all, and I just wanna say that thanks for being great friend, I hope you will find your happiness at Philippines and don’t forget that I’m here for you ALWAYS even though Im not good at advices and all that but I will try my best to help you out anytime also don’t forget to keep your head up and be strong I hope ill see you someday.
P.s I wish I could put knife in your luggage so you cant go to the Philippines haha"
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Wow, very nice letter. :] I loved that PS part at the end, hehe. I made some corrections for you so it should be okay now but I didn't want to change it any more than I had to since it will lose it's meaning, since it's from you. Sorry if I changed anything you didn't want changed though. I added a little quote at the end for you to include. :] If you will be seeing your friend before they leave try write the letter out to give to them, if you can (unless you was going to anyway). :D
"Damn I cant believe you’re moving….
I was hella shocked when you told me that around February or March. I'm seriously gonna miss you like a fat kid on a diet misses cake, haha, cheesy! Also im gonna miss your perkiness and your sense of humor. I’m really, really sorry when I tried to avoid you these few days. I tried to distance myself from you because I was just upset that you're leaving and I didn’t really wanna get close/attached or talk to you because of it (obviously you noticed it and you were right) but I kept denying that I was trying to drift away from you. But now, I seriously regret what I did and I thought it was stupid for me to do that because what I did was just wasted time and making myself more sad and, yeah. Anyways, I just wanna say thank you for everything, you are one of the greatest person I ever met, seriously. I remember how we met in 8th grade it was at lunch. Mehreen said hi to me and you were like “Hi Princess I like your name”, lol. And guess what? That’s when I first saw number 1 and I thought he was cute so I had an eye on him but I stopped and you know why. *wink wink* But damn, I learned a lot of stuff from our deep talks, you're hella expert on things like poetry so keep it up “love counselor”, haha! Seriously though, and “lucky charm”(number 1). I also enjoyed talking to you about guys sexiness and secrets and your interesting stories. Thanks for helping me whenever I had a problems, you gave out great advice but I regret it when I didn’t listen to your advice because it was always true. Thanks for being a great friend, I hope you will find your happiness at Philippines and don’t forget that I’m here for you ALWAYS, even though I'm not good at giving advice and all that, but I will try my best to help you out anytime. Also, don’t forget to keep your head up and be strong. I hope I'll get to see you again someday.
P.s. I wish I could put knife in your luggage so you can't go to the Philippines, haha!
"Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow.
Don't walk behind me, I may not lead.
Just walk beside me and be my friend. --Albert Camus.
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