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i need help on my unfinished poem?
i need help writing on the poem that describing my similarities/diffrences which is turtle because i could be slow,shy but i dont know what turtle's elses personality is, but i made a start:
slow like a turd
and shy like a turd
hides when shy
anyone got the idea? please help (it doesnt have to rhyme)
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Turd? Hahah, is this a joke?!
You know turds are poo, right?
Okay.. well..
Slow like a turtle
And shy like a turtle
Hides when shy
Domestic yet lonely
Seeming as not
Decieving abilities
Forgotten easily
Due to lack of public personality
But remembered by the ones of love
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well, heres an idea::
Slow as a slug
but more gentle than a thug
i hide when im scared
im pretty much bare
I live in my shell
doesnt that ring a bell
i dont like to yell
cant you tell
im a shy critter
im not bitter
im sweet as can be
unless im a snapper
and i guess that could help you out a little bit?? sorry if i didnt help but i try!
hope i helped!!
~.:*liviy*:.~
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Tip: Don't use the word "turd" because "turd" means "sh*t". where I live, anyway. (USA) When i first read the poem i was wondering why you were comparing yourself to a piece of poop.
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Well, a problem is that we don't know much about your personality so we don't know what to write. Tell me what your personality is like and I'll help you with your poem by editing this answer later.
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