S_C answered Saturday March 3 2007, 8:37 pm: This isn't what the site is for, but because I'm in a creative writing class I couldn't help but pass up the opporutnity to read someone else's work. I've had a long day and am kind of tired, so I only read a little bit. Barely past after she meets the boy and we find out her articulation sucks. But anyway, what I've read so far is okay. If you don't mind I'd like to finish reading it tomorrow that was I'll be more focused on your story rather than the other million things running through my head. I'm going to bookmark the link to it, so don't delete it or anything. Unfortunately though, due to the fact that I'm a moderator and this is not the type of question that belongs on this site- I'm going to have to delete it. But if you really want some critiquing I can bring it to school with me and have friends read it and get back to you.
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