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read my poem and tell me what you think :)
a guy, a girl
ment to be
together forever
nothing more to see
been through so much
they could outlast it all
they were destined to be
as every one could see..
so much love between the two..
as if everyone knew..
that they would last forever..
everyone was wrong..
the love is now gone
the girl is gone
and all because of another guy..
they were ment to be..
forever and beyond..
and thats how it will be..
while shes dying in his arms.
do you think its good?
any comments pleasee..
i will rate high for anything :)
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awwwwwwww omg that almost brang tears to my eyes when i got to the last verse. the third and down(not including the last one) could use alittle work though. : )
Leah
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omg that's sooooo good!!!
did you right that?? lol cuz its PERFECT
it's really romantic and everything ♥
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