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poem help
can somebody tell me if this is like half ok or like anything good? if it needs corrected please do so! thank you!
Your life seems to be going all wrong
Things will evenutally be good
I know that you'll stay strong
Because I said you should.
Don't take what your mom says to heart
She really does think your a peice of art
Although she hasn't always been their for you
She really wishes she could have thought it through
You knows shes been through a tough situation
That things haven't always been swell
All she ever wanted was to have a conversation
eventually she tthough to her self "oh well"
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i strongly agree with the last person
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if you really want my help the fourth line should say; You'd hold back your tears if you could. and
the last line should say; But you told her to just "Go to hell!!"
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